Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Hehehe, that seems like something that should be in the anime... just ya know, in anime I don't think that u can put that lemon in there. The only thing that I could say about this fic to improve it would be to add more detail. I mean, the lemon just happened, u couldn't sense their emotions at all. Well, nice fic and stuff... keep up the good work!(and nice ending 'or were they'?)
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