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| "Insider Trading" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 01:26 CDT
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I'm assuming that Seto took the fall for Mokuba, who didn't really understand what was going on or didn't equate it to being that serious. That would be something that Seto would do though, protecting his little brother as much as possible. And getting out of the foster system is much easier than getting out of an insider trading charge. Sad that I know that. Anyway, looking forward to a sequel, if you were planning one. Something about this screams finished though, so I won't pester. It was a little short though.
| Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 08:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this story. I've always liked the way you present the Joey/Seto pair as mature young men not silly teens. Wish the story had been longer. Did Seto really engage in insider trading? Like Joey I find that hard to believe. Hoping for a sequel!
| Reviewed By: toni k On: June 19, 2008 22:02 CDT
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This fic was really good. I don't usually follow Yu Gi Oh but I do follow you so I took it on faith and it was well written as usual. Neat plot line and not really OOC at all. I will point this out to a few other fan fic readers who I am sure will enjoy it as well. Great work.
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