| "Clan of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 08:28 CST
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yay! Sasuke got what his choices earned him. This should be interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how the battle for the tailed beasts goes.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 23:07 CST
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That chapter was too cute!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 13:23 CST
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This is a really good chapter pause. I look forward to the next one. I hope you continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 17:55 CST
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Nicely done. hehe. I'm liking what you've done so far and the chapters have been well written. Some of then I have felt were to short for my tastes, but that is merely my opinion. Keep writing! DD
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 02:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The elders just got BURNED right in the face!!!! That was awesome I laughed my ass off!!!! Merry Christmas!!!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great New Chapters
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 14:16 CST
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hehe. well two of the Hikari know what the hell is going on, and Sakura is starting to settle in. Knowing exactly where she stands with everyone helps. Being given some space to think her own thoughts helps too. The fact that the guys are willing to see her side of things is a little surprising, but a welcome thing. Neji knows his place. I'm pleased to hear that. that he knows that his love for her is that of a friend, a brother, a comrade in arms and at service. Yes. this will be interesting to watch between Gaara and Sai. Though I get the feeling that as their feelings solidify they'll sort themselves out. I'm still rooting for Gaara!
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 15:05 CST
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poor, poor sakura
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 15:11 CDT
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*snorts* Sucks to be Gaara. To be honest, I do think Sakura would be better off with him than anyone else. Unless Sai pulls the moron stick out of his ass quick, which would lead to some fun competition. keep writing, if you get me to change my mind, on Gaara, then you've done your job!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 13:42 CDT
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Alternative version is that she falls in love with someone else entirely. Personally, I think Gaara would be kinda interesting myself, he is the strongest, and most defensively protective of her. He also can't identify the emotions he feels towards her as well, and he would protect her, and once she becomes the new queen, he would know to support her, not shield her from everything. That would make more sense, as the Hyuugas, while useful here, are a bunch of giant assholes. Neh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Nequam_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a different story, most people who do crossovers usually don't try to go deep but you went a little further than them.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: October 01, 2008 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Now I definitely don't want Sakura to end up with Sasuke! She's better off with Neji! He won't let anyone use her! WHY did you give Sasuke the power of a senshi?! He's way too power hungry and NOt to be trusted! Where's the real Kakashi and Naruto?
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how your developing Sakura and Naruto's relationship!!! Awesome chapter!!! Update soon!!
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