| "Clan of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 30, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! the original senshi showed up! So why 10 teen/court? There's only 9 planets...Unless you';re planning on involving the sun or some original planet I've never heard of...Who're the 2 girls Sasuke was with? Not surprising htat ino got slapped, she should have known better than to make fun of Naruto into a senshi's presence! Since they tends to be tad overprotective of the Moon royals...Where's Endymion in this? Did he get reborn? I doubt Serenity would want to wake up and find her soulmate gone...Plus i cannot see him letting his descendants go unprotected much less untrained...You said they are descended from Serenity's kids. Last i checked Endymion married Serenity, meaning he's their ancestor too as well! Naruto-not only looks like Serenity he is a lot like her into personality...But on which side of the family is he descended from Serenity? Paternal or maternal? PLEASE explain! Or do I need to go back and re-read the entire story to find out? And who are the senshi for Naruto and Sakura? I know their names-well 8 of them. But which planets!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great New Chapter YES Hotaru back oh yeah the rest of them there to now!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! Plz Update it Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great New Chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter
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Title: You Used my idea !:)))
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT NEW CHAPTER
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter Plz Plz Update It Soon!! P.S. Plz Plz Have Hotaru/Saturn show up and become very good friends Naruto with becouase she wonuld understand the fear and hate that Naruto has to live with all his life! And have her reincarnation look like a 12 year old!Plz!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter Plz Plz Update It Soon!! P.S. Plz Plz Have Hotaru/Saturn show up and become very good friends Naruto with becouase she wonuld understand the fear and hate that Naruto has to live with all his life! And have her reincarnation look like a 12 year old!Plz!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: j05h360 On: July 09, 2008 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMFG this has to be the most creative thing i've ever read, and i read a lot of things. I simply loved this fanfic to the point where i just didn't want to see that final page come up with no link to the next. Incredibly enjoyable, creative, and overall remarkabley amazing.Don't keep up the good work..keep up the INCREDIBLE work and plz continue to update.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love Chapter 5 plz plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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