| "Me. Inside You." Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: ah! its only a one shot...poo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't resist eaither. Very nice, kind of victorian with the virgin defilment thing.
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 02:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I can't breath! That was so...I can't find a word for it! You even made the men erotic and I'm not usually the yaoi type. DAMN!
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Reviewed By: incandescent_cindy On: June 27, 2008 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was SO hot. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting story... liked it though... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: inufan987 On: June 21, 2008 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say that this was one of, if not the best, one shot i have read. very good job. i hope you will keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Akuneko On: June 21, 2008 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very engaging and erotic. It makes me want much much more!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that is a good one shot. I thought it was miroku at first when you said lavender eyes, because I haven't watched the anime in so long. lol. and If i could have I would have made the enjoyment factor WAY higher. But a girl can only do what a girl can do. lol. I hope that I see more from you, I.S.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was exciting to read, but it was short lived
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
C-Note! Yesh! *applauds... whistles... applauds* w00t!
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Reviewed By: sesshiesboo On: June 20, 2008 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish the enjoyment factor went higher than ten because it does this story no justice i love everyone one your stories i hope you decide to write more i have a request/challenge could you write an alternate universe one shot maybe more containing masturbation(no toys),kagome/inuyasha/sesshomaru,vouyerism,strawberry icecream,a dog,cannot have the line 'fuck me harder" anywhere,and it has to be around christmas. if you do this for me it will be greatly apreciated i love your work and im inspired.
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow my big sis InuGrrrl most have love this fic lolz. I love it to you kick ass!!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love romance novels...and I must say this little scene has surpassed many that I have read as published works!!! ....think I need to take a very cold shower........
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 11:48 CDT
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One word: HOT! I LOVE period stories. Some periods more then others and this was too hot. Inugrrrl should be more than proud! Do another!!!
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story! I like that you kept his identity ambiguous by giving him black hair. At one point I was thinking it was Miroku... Great job!
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you back! Very hot oneshot - but you might want to check the rating. don't think it qualifies as Pre-teen! :)
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