| "Tension" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: killthwight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed reading this fic, it's an interesting subject to be explored and I really like how you portrayed Eighteen.
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow a K/18 fic. Never seen you write one of those before. Very well written though.
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Reviewed By: FatherMcRoury [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a nice little snippet on a subject that is definitely not overdone. I think you really captured a certain mood in regards to 18. Her story is a bit sad and her situation lonely, and I think you did a really good job with that. This was sweet and to the point. Krillin and 18 are not an easy subject to handle, and I think you have done a superb job with this. Thanks for sharing!
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Title: what fun
Reviewed By: MonkeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was lots of fun. It's been forever since I read a DBZ fic, but this was a good comeback for me. :) I really liked how well you kept them in character and the whole plot was very amusing. :) Good work. I'd love to see how their relationship plays out, but overall I'm still pleased with this the way it is. :)
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Reviewed By: GutterBall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Cat, you did SUCH a good job! So few people write about 18 (or Krillin, for that matter), and fewer still actually bother writing what she thinks. How she feels. How it is to go from ambivalent hate to...nothing...to...something. So well done. Kudos to you, girl.
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Title: fan#1
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 12:11 CDT
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This is the cutest 18/Kr fic i've ever read! its so adorable and gave me a whole new aspect of what their relationship was like, and how it could have started. great job! i love it! short and sweet! You did an amazing job, it took my brealth away and i couldn't stop reading from the first sentense!
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Title: adorable
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Adorable. Absolutely freaking adorable. I have always loved Krillin, and he deserved 18. Not many people have written about them. Your story was sweet. realistic and smooth. It flows nicely for a short story. There was no racing in it. The only problem I saw was Bulma's "I dont think the turtle is hiding anything" was used twice. But I enjoyed the story so much is the only reason I noted it at all. * actually read it twice ^_^*
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