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| "The Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 13:56 CDT
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Happy Dragon is right about 08/08/08. ;D I've yet to read anything past 08/02/08, but I shall once I'm done writing this. =P And there are more typos, not to sound rude or anything. o.o I know you write as fast as you can so feed the insatiable craving that gnaws at the heart of a yaoi fan. Amazing..... amazingness. The superiors are just.... disturbing. xX And they need to wear boxers or something. Only Axel could rip his cloak to shreds like that, and only he and Marluxia would wear nothing under. Oh, the suspense and marvelousness. =D I shall await the third installment with bated breath. And Axel and Roxas action figures. =P
| Title: I Know What You're Talking About. XD
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I like the little one shots. They are like . . . scary intense. . . . Hmm you have two styles . . . like a coin has two sides . . . . Crack/humor!fics are like 'ditzy Demyx', and then things like 'Steam', 'Tango' and the one-shots for Axel month (I Vote Masturbation on 08/08/08!), and like 'all buisness Demyx', as far as the range of your styles go . . . Grr, bad attempt at an anology. . . Ah, but the important part, the review!!! What can I say, other than this really rocked--and you got Sora in! WhOOttt! (With the taquila XD). I was surprised that you would have them 'wiped out', but it had been hinted at, and with the droughts . . . . It was really sad, but really sweet at the end too. And I like that balance in your writings, reality (warped, but still) and humor, and hope . . . it's comforting. And the idea that we still have at least a lemon left is also nice. Ah, I liked the 'higher ups' they amused me. I had thought that they were going to force Axel to wait for Roxas to become a god himself before doing anything with him. Yeah, I figured he could have been shoe-horned in as the new 'god of light' or something randomly crapy like that. But this ending . . . . . . . . just so many possibilities. Ah, but that also means that Roxy has had to live with PervertedHorny!Sora in his head for 6 years. XD . . . . . . . Now to just find him a Riku to love. XD Yeah triangles, or maybe squares, Sora maybe sharing a body with Roxas, but Axel still has dibs . . . . Although I have seen AkuRokuSo, which wouldn't be much a stretch for this . . . . Meh, I trust your insanity. So I shall just send you my luffs and go wait in a corner as I play with shiny string to amuse myself. Later!
| Title: MMmmm . . . crack-tastic!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta say, I love the way your warped mind works. The interactions, the utter silliness . . And the improbability of everything! I was almost waiting for Roxas' inner (perverted) voice to sound like Sora, but I know that there's no way to work that detail in. My 2 favorite points--I.E., I stopped reading to do a double take of what I had just read--was the line about Vexen standing for science, and the passage about the humans creating the gods, sustaining the gods through faith, and that new worshipers would give them new form & personalities . . . that really made me think . . . Anyway, this is ridiculous and entertaining, and so I luff it. Keep up the excellent writing, we're all rooting for you grad-girl!
| Reviewed By: Lauren-1121 On: June 28, 2008 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a really creative take on the story. I really liked it. :)
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 12:17 CDT
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I didn't forget to review. =P Then again, when DO I? xD That was... interesting. o.0 Did you just randomly come up with the idea to, like, bring down writer's block? xD Still cool to have them as gods. I would woship Axel all day. ;D And I'm such a geeky pest for pointing out that there was a typo. Scan over it, you might find it. That or check your e-mail. xD
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 12:17 CDT
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I didn't forget to review. =P Then again, when DO I? xD That was... interesting. o.0 Did you just randomly come up with the idea to, like, bring down writer's block? xD Still cool to have them as gods. I would woship Axel all day. ;D And I'm such a geeky pest for pointing out that there was a typo. Scan over it, you might find it. That or check your e-mail. xD
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