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| "Why Not?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Listen
Reviewed By: I am the author of this story On: December 23, 2008 12:22 CST
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I am the author of this story, and want to tell you all thanks for reviewing, i can't get on as of yet. So the next chapter will not be up for intil a while. I will probably re-write this also. Sorry for such a long wait, and thank you for your reviews. ;)
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:35 CDT
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this was kind of confusing, and the whole thing in bold wasn't such a great idea, if you did that on purpose. Plus it's a little OOC if you ask me, InuYasha would never do something if Kagome was uncomfortable with it. Remember their first kiss in the second movie? She iniciated it, not him. And HE was the one who tried to act like it was nothing after words, not her. And honestly, if she's staying with him in the past, wouldn't they be married and 'doing it' by now, anyway? I don't think it's such a good idea for someone unwilling to write lemons to write a story that revolves around sex, voluntary or not.
| Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was perfect. You have no idea how long I've been searching for something straight. Than you. I can't wait to read the next chapters.
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