| "Happy Birthday Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
deliciously divine!!!! Mmmm.... *needs a nice cold shower* God... I feel so happy and pleasant inside! This has certainly lifted my spirits. Great work!!! |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: August 22, 2002 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked what you did with Gohan...this is a really good story...keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 11:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Starheart:"So, Vegeta, what do think about this fanfic so far?"
Vegeta:"Well, since I'm your guest, earthling Starheart, I would say that, if this fanfic was to be better, I should be with my earthling wife, making love to her instead of someone else!"
Starheart:"Oh ok, well what I think about this fanfic so far is that....."
Duo(interupting starheart):"That it stinks badly and so does Starheart!"
Starheart:You just signed you death wish by saying that, Duo, so PREPARE TO DIE YUPPIE SCUM!!!!"
Duo:"Uh-oh!"
-Gruesome fight scene between Starheart and Duo, but in the end, Starheart remains standing while Duo is not all bruised and bloodied seriously-
Starheart:"That will teach you not to say that I stink, now who's the best between us both in hand to hand combat, Duo?"
Duo(in a weak status):"You...are...the best...Starheart."
Starheart:"Good, now as a further punishment to keep you to remain in line, I will be taking this from you."
-Starheart then cut Duo's braid off of his hair.-
Starheart:"Now, Wufei, can you and Heero come in here please to get Duo out of my sight."
Wufei:"It would please me to do so, Great one."
-Wufei and Heero enter.-
Heero:"You know, Duo looks much better without that braid, in fact he looks more like a man without it."
-Heero and Wufei then drag the unconscious Duo out of sight.-
Starheart:"Now as I was saying, before Duo had interupted me, that what I think about this fanfic is that it is really great, and I hope that this fanfic has a good ending to it soon." |
Reviewed By: Diana On: August 19, 2002 11:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I've read so far. I really hope you add to this fanfic and keep writing on anything else. You must have a gift to write this well. |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH man! That's some heavy stuff there. I don't know what to say, I'm speechless. I can't wait for the next chappie! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 17:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
hehe nice.. you know, I've never had a thing for Gohan.. till just now.. I hope your happy LOL |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 11:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god people! Why arn't you reviewing! This is a a great story! I'll sick ChiChi on you with her frying pan from hell if you people don't review.
(oh by the way THANK YOU for mentioning my fic, I'm really flatered) |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 21:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe this is great! It was worth all the reading just to see Gohan call him Sire! hehehe I'll be waiting for updates :) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 14:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo This is such a good story. You just gotta finish the next chappie 'k? Don't leave me hangin. |
Reviewed By: Mela989898 On: July 09, 2002 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It does get stranger and stranger but I love it! |
Reviewed By: hee hee On: July 09, 2002 16:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is a cute story. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: July 09, 2002 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finaly somebody shuts harpie,I mean Chi Chi up! Gohan you go boy! Needless to say I enjoyed your story and look forward to your next update! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 09, 2002 12:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story. I'm glad Vegeta knows the truth about Bulma's wish and I hope it starts to heal things between them. I'm a little curious as to where you're going with the Gohan plotline. It's interesting, but I'm not sure yet how it's going to tie into the plot. A little mystery is good. :) |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING ! |
Reviewed By: GOKUSSJ On: July 09, 2002 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYes |
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