| "Happy Birthday Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelica_lisa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2012 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story - hope you will be able to finish it some day. |
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 13:46 EDT
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this is such a brilliant story I was mesmorised from the very beginning, I love the way you describe things, your metaphors and similes are captivating 'blown away like pollen from a dandelion' 'her effect on him was like free radicals through his body' amazing. It's a shame this isn;t finished, but I enjoyed this tale nonetheless.
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Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:57 EST
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Well on it's way? For three years? I was going back over this and it's too good to lose.................
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Title: korisovra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Korisovra Ti'Kildust On: April 10, 2004 01:48 EDT
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*bows to the authoress* Excellent piece of work. I want to see more of this fic and especially of this caliber. It's rare enough that I find a fic that actually interests me anymore, much less one that interests me this much. Please continue or I shall be forced to let fly the flame demon I keep in my back pocket................:P
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Title: WHERE ARE YOU?!
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 14:55 EDT
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I've not see you for months! I'm really worried that something has happened! I tried emailing your aol account, but it says you no longer exist. I've also emailed your msn account and you haven't replied. Are you okay? Will I ever get to speak to you again? Please, Jada, if you read this, tell me you're okay so that I can stop worrying. =(
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Reviewed By: Jess On: June 13, 2003 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a little disturbed by the gohan-vegeta fantasy but it is good get a little more b/v action back into it. |
Reviewed By: pearlcat On: May 29, 2003 08:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good.... nifty concepts. I can't wait to read the rest. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: May 27, 2003 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! *smacks videl upside the head* She gets it! :) Oh well, I guess it wasn't really her fault. heh heh. cant wait til next time! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 20:47 EDT
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Heh heh. Great chapter. I have to say, Gohan surprised me by blasting the hell out of Picollo! Ack, and now he's going to find Videl! I bet Vegeta's wishing they'd used those dragonballs right about now. Can't wait til the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 16:45 EDT
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I know Gohan was going to be mad when he woke up, but I never expected him to hurt Piccollo that badly! Anyway, hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see more work of this caliber.
I find very few fanfics that can catch and hold my interest but this one has all the way through, and I thank you for that,lady. And of course I'm waiting for a continuation......... |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover On: April 01, 2003 16:14 EST
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Hey, when are you going to update this story, man? It's been like, 3 months since you last updated! Hurry up! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 13:14 EST
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Hey, have you ever thought of maybe updating this story anytime soon? Please? |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 14:39 EST
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HURRY AND UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: HontouTempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 21:23 EST
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Good writing, but I want to see more of V/B. Please? |
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