| "Happy Birthday Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn On: July 09, 2002 12:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story. I'm glad Vegeta knows the truth about Bulma's wish and I hope it starts to heal things between them. I'm a little curious as to where you're going with the Gohan plotline. It's interesting, but I'm not sure yet how it's going to tie into the plot. A little mystery is good. :) |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING ! |
Reviewed By: GOKUSSJ On: July 09, 2002 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYes |
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