| "A Life Time of Loneliness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 16:29 CDT
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wow , this has some great potential , I look forward to more
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Title: Thankyou
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 19:48 CDT
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Thankyou Rainstorm i appreciate the critisime very helpful indeed! thankyou so much, when i use an RTF save file the spelling and grammar don't work with them. I'll try harder critsime is very appreciated
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 16:42 CDT
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not a lot to go on but it has potential. also another proof reading there are several typing/grammar errors. i'll be watching for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 15:41 CDT
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poor kagome. it sucks losing someone you love. innuyasha is an ass. it about time is smacked him. he seriousy need to learn that you don't mess with someone when they are hurting. and kikyo just needs to die. then lets see how inuyasha reacts. update soon,
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