| "Life is Lovelier the Second Time Around" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! You have updated!!!! =D and sorry i didn't get to this sooner, i'v been out of town a lot and e-mail builds up. lol. well I found it and I had read it! YAY! lol. I LOVED the last part when shikamaru was like, 'I'V ALWAYS WANTED TO SLEEP WITH YOU.' lol. that was HILARIOUS! hehe. Well it was a really good chap, short yes, but really good! Oh, and I'm on chapter 440 in the naruto manga. Isn't that the most recent english translated manga? well anyway, glad you updated and thanks for mentioning my fic! =) SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you definitely toned down the crazy I'll give that much. And how could you have Shikamaru say what he did at the end. I mean isn't he dating Temari in this fic. Or did you forget. Or am I thinking a different fic entirely? Though at this point I'm desperate for even a hint of lemon, so I geuss I shouldn't be complaining.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry i took me like forever to review this new chap. OK at this point it's not very new. But hey I finally showed up again after mysteriously disappearing. Anyway perfect 10 as to be expected from one of my favorite authors. Poor Chogi (sorry if I spelled his name wrong). Oh and no you don't want to know what the top three greatest experinces in my life where. If I told you, I would have to hunt you down and kill you. Which really don't wanna do because if you die you won't you won't be able to finnish the story. But anyone great chap. Not as much humor as the other chaps, which I actually find to be a bit refreshing. UPDATE SOON K?
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! you found an -eth word! lol. and YAY!!! You have finally updated!!! =) and poor Choji got his chips crushed. lol. and Hinata took herself hostage? interesting. lol haha. well i liked the chap (as always) and i can't wait for the next one!!! UPDATE AS SOO AS YOU CAN!!! =D
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 14:08 CST
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LOL xD I waited long for this, so it was great! as it should be.. Can't wait for the other chapters!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! you have updatedeth!!! lol. (i don't know i felt like saying something with -eth) well i really liked this chap!!! and i understand the being busy thing, with school and everything who isn't? well anyway, Hinata was crazy man! lol. i loved it. hehe. and i can't wait for the next chap and the rest of this fight. hehe. well UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: hahahahahaha
Reviewed By: kakashinobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wtf thats so funny rofl i reallly like hinata espically in this fic man keep going man this is my current favorite fic
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahaahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaha, cough, hahaha cough, cough, cough hahahaha cough. Laughing too much need to stop, or might die of lack of oxygen. settles down and drinks water, ok im good again. And I have just one thing to say this chap is so funny its dangerous, I almost died due to laughing fits, and it was the fourth greatest expereince in my life I have ever had!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. nice chap!!! it was GREAT!!! (like always) and i personaly don't think they're gay, but it's true that a lot of people do. and Kakashi really is a perv. lol. anyway, can't wait for the next chap to see the fight!!! hehe. so UPDATE SOON!!! and hopefully i will too!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 06:31 CDT
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you was meeeeeean!!!! Bu.. bu.. but you should never dessicrate Gaara's corpse. ='( I hope he's happy though!! [wtf?] I'm sorry i haven't been able to review sooner.. i have no internet at home so i'm at school. in business studies again, believe it or not. =] My friend Lozi almost threw a fit when you mentioned Deidara and Sasori. [ultimate gay pairing there!!] This chappie was a bit short, but i'm not complaining! ¢¾
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahaha, OMG this is funny, hahahahahahahahahahahaha, hold on i'm almost done, hahahahahah. Ok its out of ny system, this chap is without a doubt the funniest of your work yet. I dont know how you do it. You've always got new material, I can't wait to see what you'll think of next. I just have 2 requests. 1 no more catfights, atleast not for awhile, when you wrote that Hinata gave a grin that would have made Tsunade nervous, I was almost to scared to scared to keep reading. And 2 when is that chapter full of Sasuke/Sakura cough action cough happening cough.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. chiyos a hobbit. hehe. and yes catights make me laugh, is there a problem with that? anyway, great chap!!! i really liked it!!! can't wait for the next one!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The speeches the two gave in this chapter didn't make a bit of sense, but they was hilarious just same. Perfect 10. In unrelated news news, I finished the next chapter of my fic but for some reason the site wont let me post it. So until I can figure out how to fix that my story's gonna be on hold for awhile sorry.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. what can i say cat fight make me laugh and they're really funny. ESPECIALLY if it's Hinata and Sakura. lol. this chap was really funny! i liked it. and Sakura and Hinata's speaches were HILARIOUSE, Sakura was all,' the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition!.' so many V's. i was just laughing. anyway, it was great!!! UPDATE SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 03:56 CDT
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL! whats with all the 'V's!!?? And i love that: 'you'll regret the day you crossed the wrong fish!!' xD i read this in my lesson at school and my friend called india kept laughing.. and she doesn't even read Naruto. OMG! my class are playing the macarana or whatever... -_-''' I'm in business studies at the moment for two hours and i have to give a presentation in a minute. fuun! anyhow, thanks for writing the chapter and for making me laugh! you've brightened up my overcast day! ¢¾
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