| "Life is Lovelier the Second Time Around" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 11:21 CDT
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flying chicken. hilarious! ^^ but.. Gaara was taken. no fair. =[ peoples are evil by doing that!! *frazzles* I'll save Gaara! ¢¾ however, it was funny with the whole trap thing with the honey and the marbles. =D me wants to try it now.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!! Garras been captuered!!! (well it's not like i didn't know it was coming, but still) Stupid Deidara and his flying chicken! lol. well it was a great chap! it was really funny wen Kankuru fell in Garras trap. and wen garra insalted Deidara's bird thing. Now i get y it's called 'i'v never seen a flying chicken.' so UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENSE NEXT!!! RESCUE GARRA! hehe.
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Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!! GAARA IS HILARIOUS!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! HE BLASTED A HOLE THROUGH HIS WALL!!!!!! TEMARI WAS SSSSSSOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!! UPDATE AND I"LL GIVE YOU A TYPED UP COOKIE!!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 06:20 CDT
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yays!! a lot of Gaara! me loves him, so im glad he has his own chapter. ^^ but it was meeean! he just wants to be alone but no! he had to be followed! And raping fangirls? =O *beats them* heheh. knowing me, i'd be one of them fangirls, but i'd win his heart! yeah lol. im rambaling now. -_-' but i'm at school, and i'm bored and i need to do something, so here ya go. i'm going to ramble to yous guys. you seem more funner (a word?) than arts week. keep up the good work, and please update soon, destenyne =3
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! GARRA!!!! lol. hehe. anyway, i liked the chap. poor garra being chased around by crazy fan girls that want to rape him. good thin Temari knocked them out. lol. and Temari was going all coo-coo for cocoa puffs cuz she 'needed' shikamaru. that was funny. well UPDATE SOON!! YAY GARRA!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!! that was HILARIOUSE!!! Hinata is so freakin' diabolical! I LOVE IT! lol. and wen Tsunade used that line from ginding nemo. now that was funny! i love reading this. IT'S SO AWESOME!!! well anyway it was great (as always) and UPDATE SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the most hilarious things i have ever read. serious. =] please write more stuff, pleeeease?
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 16:02 CDT
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once again great chapter! plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes i am back! YAY! and i did read ur other story yesterday, and it was AWESOME! anyway, GREAT chap. Druged Hinata is HILARIOUSE!!! 'ur whiskers want me to juggle spoons for them' i was cracking up wen i read that. hehe. so UPDATE SOON!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! and pandas eat cucumbers?
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Reviewed By: HarpieAna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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LOL! Funny, though Naruto and Hinata NEED to stop fainting. ^^ Sakura's nuts...Sasuke's literally nuts...THE HOKAGE'S A PERVERT! XD
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The return of the dreaded drug! lol. and no i wuldn't mind if Naruto didn't know who his parents were. i don't think he know anyway. and sry that i didn't review last chap like i said in my authers note, i was in disney and i just came back 2day. well anyway, AWESOME chaps. I was lmbo wen they did that sexy jutsu on Kakashi. hehe. he's such a perv. lol. so UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Hilarious! Hope you write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the dead mose thing ment kinda that u would be stuck waiting a while longer cuz it was a cliffhanger, but w/e. it's not that important. anyway, loved the chap! it was great! as always. so UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, HILARIOUS!!! sad for Naruto and his ramen though, but still it was so freakin' funny. and yes the title is stupid enough. lol. :) and no i havn't updated it YET, but i'm workin on it. It'll come out, hopefully, in two or three days. sry! anyway GREAT chap and THANX 4 THE QUICK UPDATE!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 00:51 CDT
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LOL LOL LOL!!!! Sasuke and his halusinations are HILARIOUSE!!!! i couldn't stop cracking up. well anywho, sorry that i had to kinda end my chap with a cliffy, but i wanted to get the hinata and naruto scene better. so ya i'm workin on. and this writersblock i'm getting doesn't help. so sorry!! again! well enough about that, i really liked the first chap and i'm glad that u came up with this so quickly. IT WAS GREAT!! so UPDATE SOON. and i'll hopefully do the same.
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