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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending for chap 15 was hilarious. Seriously at the rate you keep bringing up awseome new chapters i'm gonna run out of adjectives to describe how awseome they are. See what I just did I used awseome twice in one sentence. LOL. But seriously you've got talent for this kind of literature. Oh and on the subject of the couples's future kids well i'm imaganing a pink haired Sasuke and "OH MY GOD" i'm blind. Oh wait everthings clearing up again, daaaaaaa there it goes again, please dont bring that kind of charachter into existence. Dont get the wrong message though I want them to have kids just not wierd looking ones. O and one more thing thanks for for reviewing my kh fanfic expect the new chap in 2 to 3.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awseome story. By the way about Gara's love life. Though I wouldn't be offended if he had three girls at once I would like it better if he just found one girl and stuck with her. Also are you gonna let Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto, and Hinata have kids at one point? I would so like this story alot better if they did.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awseome story. By the way about Gara's love life. Though I wouldn't be offended if he had three girls at once I would like it better if he just found one girl and stuck with her. Also are you gonna let Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto, and Hinata have kids at one point? I would so like this story alot better if they did.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO! Garra!!! lol. anyway great chap! it was HILARIOUSE!! poor poor Naruto, keeps getting hit. lol. the roadrunner thing was really funny. whily cyoty getting squished by an anvil is always an lol moment. anyway it was great! i can't wait to read the next chap!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 10:29 CDT
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"It's going to steal your organs and suck you dry, then when it's all none corpsafied it will take me and then it will bring back it's girlfriend, and she will take my organs" O_O YES!! Take Ino!! she won't be annoying anymore! And who knew Kisame was gay? i'd have thought he would be with Itachi.. but then again, who wouldn't be? and and.. roadrunner. just wtf? Also, isn't Inuyasha's sword called the Tetsusaiga, not Tetsaiga? just randomness i thought i'd tell you there. And there's no more Inuyasha anymore.. it's all finished. sad, really.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL!!! *no like i'm litarly rolling on my floor lauging.* O-ostrich!! hahaha! he got hit somewere very unpleasnt!!! lol. he had a higher voice then Hinata! and Sasuke passed out from laughing so much!!! HAHAHAH!!! *can't breath* o.k. let me stop before i pull a sasuke. lol. and Itachi has a thing for his il bro? humm....lol. well great chap!! it was funny! and YES!!! they're finally going to save garra!!! YAY!!! so UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 08:38 CDT
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... he has a thing for his brother. it sounds like incest, if i didn't know any better! And Naruto has a higher voice than Hinatas!? i didn't think it was possible! the world is changing so, so fast! *cowers under table* ostrich! naruto is an ostrich! *shrieks* (i don't like ostriches.)
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 05:59 CDT
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i've never even heard of shikamaru moving that fast.. lol and shikamaru's not butter!? i thought he waas! and i never knew kankuro could talk backwards in latin about flowers. maybe he has a new hobby! =o
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! i can't believe Shikamarus not butter? haha! that was really funny! and i never knew shika could move that fast either. and i have no idea wat, 'Pop is dead, my styl in super flat,' means. it's probably a mistake. and poor Kankuro kept getting knocked out. lol. and then he knocked out himselfe. poor poor kankuro. HEHE! I hate the waiting game too. it's mean and makes u wait. lol. well they still must save Garra! and i can't wait for the next chap, so UPDATE SOON!!! oh, and i'll try to find a way to polish my sock, but it might take a while. lol.
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 13:23 CDT
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ooch. it's gonna hurt naruto when he finds out gaara was taken. but it's a good chapter so far. ^-^ can you add more humor into the next few chapters? i need something to make me laugh..
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya, i think she was drooling over him, but still that idea never really crossed my mind. but w/e. well nice chap! i liked the part wen the old guy was like, "sis are you dead?" and Chiyo was just playing. lol. anyway i can't wait to read the next one and see what'll happene!! so UPDATE SOON!!! and i will keep R&Ring, writing....and flossing....and polishing my socks- wait. can you even do that?
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 09:58 CDT
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in my opinion, sai does look like sasuke. and for that i dont like him. its also got to do with the fact that he talks about penises a lot. but hey, ill read the story even if you mention the Ino and Sai pairing cuz i like your style and i love the jokes. but please. make gaara wake up surrounded by fangirls, just to make me smile ^^
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap! and about the sai and ino thing...idk. i never really thought of them being together, but i wouldn't mind if u made them a couple. and ya i knw wat ur saying. I never really saw the resemblance (idk if i spelled that right. i don't think so though.) between Sasuke and Sai. Idk y ppl say that they look so much a like. maybe cuz they both look emo or something, lol. and sry, but writers block is EVIL! i'v been trying to finish the chap trust me. so don't cry anime tears! oh and a girl from suna.....no i don't think i can remember any of their names. sry. well UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 06:49 CDT
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coolies! Another awesome chapter. i love how Kankuro said Temari had years left being the biggest bitch on the planet. but i think Ino would win that.. it's not me, i just hate her. and also, i don't like the thought of Gaara being shared by three people. sorry. again, thats just me..
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kankuro and Temari. But at lwast there still alive! YAY! but Garra is still captuered!!! NOOO!!! rescue GARRA!!! and yes he can sleep after Shukaku gets sucked out. or at least he should. but i'm pretty sure he can. and Gatta being shared with three girls? ummm....i'm not really that into that idea. sry. and sry for not updateing sooner, but i'v written half of the next chap i'm just stuck. writers block really sucks!!! anywya i'll get it out as soon as i can. hopefully this weekend. again SRY! anyway UPDATE SOON!! I REALLY WAT TO SEE WAT HAPPENESE NEXT!!!
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