| "Life is Lovelier the Second Time Around" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahaha, OMG this is funny, hahahahahahahahahahahaha, hold on i'm almost done, hahahahahah. Ok its out of ny system, this chap is without a doubt the funniest of your work yet. I dont know how you do it. You've always got new material, I can't wait to see what you'll think of next. I just have 2 requests. 1 no more catfights, atleast not for awhile, when you wrote that Hinata gave a grin that would have made Tsunade nervous, I was almost to scared to scared to keep reading. And 2 when is that chapter full of Sasuke/Sakura cough action cough happening cough.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. chiyos a hobbit. hehe. and yes catights make me laugh, is there a problem with that? anyway, great chap!!! i really liked it!!! can't wait for the next one!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The speeches the two gave in this chapter didn't make a bit of sense, but they was hilarious just same. Perfect 10. In unrelated news news, I finished the next chapter of my fic but for some reason the site wont let me post it. So until I can figure out how to fix that my story's gonna be on hold for awhile sorry.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. what can i say cat fight make me laugh and they're really funny. ESPECIALLY if it's Hinata and Sakura. lol. this chap was really funny! i liked it. and Sakura and Hinata's speaches were HILARIOUSE, Sakura was all,' the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition!.' so many V's. i was just laughing. anyway, it was great!!! UPDATE SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 03:56 CDT
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL! whats with all the 'V's!!?? And i love that: 'you'll regret the day you crossed the wrong fish!!' xD i read this in my lesson at school and my friend called india kept laughing.. and she doesn't even read Naruto. OMG! my class are playing the macarana or whatever... -_-''' I'm in business studies at the moment for two hours and i have to give a presentation in a minute. fuun! anyhow, thanks for writing the chapter and for making me laugh! you've brightened up my overcast day! ¢¾
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 13:31 CDT
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ohmygod! i'm so sorry i didn't review the last chapter! i really liked this one and the other chappie, and i really want you to keep going with this, i really like it. Another great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. i feel bad for Naruto, what is that, like the 4th time he gets hit there? lol. and poor poor Sasuke! he had HINATA beat him there. now that's just gotta hurt. and yay! another catfight! lol. and i'll hold you to that Gin Ichimaru being good thing. well great chap!! hehe. and i JUST finished updateing my fic! so check it out! AND i did put in a little something about my next fic! so there! happy now? lol. AGAIN GREAT CHAP AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT'LL HAPPENE NEXT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! and i'll try to do the same!!!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as usual. And you chose a perfect cliffhanger. By the way I have a favor to ask. Lately i've been reading alot of Itachi/Sakura fics. So could you make a chapter with some Sakura/Sauke action to drown it out, if you catch my drift. One more thing i'm like half way done with making the first official chap of my fic. And I left you message about the story flow in my fics review column, so if you haven't already read it please do.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This new chap was good. The only thing that disapointed me was how short it was. But that's ok I know you'll update soon, unlike me your writer who makes a comitment to getting his/her fics updated (sorry, but I don't know your gender). Which reminds I really should get to finnishing the next chap of my fic(I've really bin wanting to get to finnishing it but I get sidetracked so easily, wait wait I'm goining of topic sorry). BTW thanks for agreeing with me AnimePrincessInuLover thing is I don't really care who comes first so long as it happens. Which brings me to a new idea this fic could end right around after the kids are born. And then you could start the sequal to this fic. Who's with me?
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. CATFIGHT! hehe. that was funny. and i had almost 4got about that little thing that happened between Hinata and Ita. Sasuke should kill him for that one reson. lol. (even tho he's supposed to be good or w/e.) and for the curse mark thing. i guess that it'd work if he had like a near death kinda thing and the curse mark would like go levle 2 to help him survive or w/e. and YES pink haird mini sasuke is very weird! and i guess i can tell u wat anime my new fic will be. it's going to be.......Naruto! again! lol. but that's really it! no more details! but i MAY put the summery or something as a little sneak peak sort of thing wen i update next. well......maybe. anyway, great chap!!! can't wait to see what'll happene next!!! UPDATE SOON!!!! wow! another long review. hehe.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 23:50 CDT
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YAY!! U updated!! hehe and that was the weirds most hilariouse genjutsu EVER!!! LOL!!! nine wives? hilariouse man hilariouse! i was cracking up wen he kissed chiyo! and i agree with Vospader21 on the kids thing. accept the youngest one should be the sexy jutsu naruto not the oldest. i'm not sure why, but i think it would go better that way. anyway, great chap! i can't wait to see what'll happene next!!! and yay no weird mini pink haired sasukes! lol. and my new fic.....ya not telling it's a secret! sry! but i CAN tell u the name! it's going to be called 'Just a joke, right?' and that's all ur getting outta me! wow! long review! well UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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xD xD strange gentjutsu! Lol! would you say that Naruto was cheating on Hinata with everyone?
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Comedy mixed in perfectly with Hentai. Pure genous. Still a bit creeped out about how it ended but still genous. Genous thats my adjective of the review. Oh and on the subject of the couples future kids. Well for Naruto and Hinata I propose 2 kids. A sexy jutsu Naruto for the eldest child and and brunette boy with Naruto's hairstyle as the younger. If there's anyone who seconds my notion let me have a show of reviews from fellow members. Anyone, anyone all you have to do is write in your reviews saying you agree. But still its a free country (or atleast where im writing this it's a free country). I encourage those who don't agree to speak up as well. Just make sure you say what you're reason behind saying no is. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. Ino's big butt. hehe. that was hilariouse! lol. and *shudders* pink haird mini sasuke? weird!!! lol. anyway, great chap!!! so glad you updated! well i liked it!!! u did a great job! UPDATE SOON!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 06:38 CDT
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*spazzes out* a mini pink haired sasuke.. i could see that! xD And i love how shikamaru was taunting Ino's big butt! And don't worry destenyne.. not many people know how to spell the name of Inuyasha's sword.. i had to look on the internet to finish spelling it right! IY was the sceond manga i read, so it's kinda special to me too. ^^
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