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| "“When She Says ‘Osuwari’, Sit.”" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: seiteki_tenshi (NSI) On: April 25, 2010 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Haunting! A wonderfully disturbing tale of heartbreak, desire, and love.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way you wrote this story. It can't exactly be called 'macabre', more like sad. I'm left wondering if Kagome is alive or if she is a ghost, whether her adventures were real, or not. Regardless, the situation is sad, but the boy's presence makes me feel better. At least, Kagome has company. It's nice that someone is taking care of her. I like the way you jump backward to moments in time. You're stories always remind me of shows like "The Twilight Zone". I wonder if it is only those of us familiar with the show that are able to appreciate it. Awesome story, and don't think I haven't read the other ones as well. My favorite is Jakotsu and his obsessions with the Inuyasha anime. I guess, I can say that I like your older works best. Snow
| Reviewed By: coyotechild On: June 28, 2008 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe you should use your time to write one good story instead of so many bad stories. You've posted dozens of stories that are formatted poorly. Are hard to read at best. And offer no originality or enjoyment. I think you would do better to write one story well then to write so many stories half heartedly.
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