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| "Please Come Back" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Nasty_Gakusei On: October 01, 2008 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wtf, this was so sad. Why don't you write angst more often? Of course, you know I love your other stuff, but this was heart wrenching. I was holding my breath through the whole thing, hoping that he would at least lose it enough that he would find contentment in her presence. But she was gone, and I was sad. Even the end didn't cheer me up. =[
| Reviewed By: Lacymom1109 On: August 23, 2008 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like all your fics, this was extremely well written. I found it very sad and sweet. It's nice seeing a less disturbing side of your creativity!
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