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| "The Heart Within" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: riversan On: July 19, 2010 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right through the wall... saw that one coming. Now that the two of them have done their manly soul searching, they can move on to some manly groveling.
| Reviewed By: JaaaaaaneyJane On: July 07, 2010 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed this in so long, I'd just get so caught in life in between catching the new chapters that I never got a chance to >.< But moving on, since my excitement can't contain itself any longer, OMG OMG OMG IT'S TOTALLY WORKING OUT AND NOW KURAMA MIGHT STOP BEING SO EMO AND HIEI'S ACTUALLY ADMITTING HIS FEELINGS, AND OMG IF SANGO REJECTS THEM, I'LL DIIIIIIIEEEEE O.O Ahem...>.> But, yes, your chapters never cease to captivate, and I only pray that this story never ends...or if it does, you'll continue another one, hopefully in the same crossover universe XD I just can't believe that things are finally coming to a climax, it leaves me so giddy that I had trouble just reading, since my eyes just kept skipping lower and lower in an attempt to somehow read faster than I'm actually able to. There's so many things I want to mention, like the new relationships that's shown between new and old characters alike, or that sweet, hot, sexy yaoi scene, or the progress Sango's shown in these chapters, but sadly, I'm actually running short on time =/ I just hope that you truly understand how much your writing is appreciated and enjoyed, and that you never stop. Gods, I even have this story bookmarked, and check regularly for updates XD Crap, gotta run >.< Looking forward to your next update!!
| Title: Jasmine
Reviewed By: YazzyBoo On: June 14, 2010 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous chapter YFate, this the most well-written Fanfic I know and by far my all-time favorite(; The fights in this story are extremely graphic and very well thought organized. I am in LOVE with your fanfics. You are a phenomenal writer and I can only hope to be half as good as you); Thanks again for this action-packed, emotional, and addicting story of yours. Now, I have already rated allnthe self-enjoyment and gramar based tallys to full mark and I can only hope this pleases you [: Ahem, I can't believe Sango lost D; the description of pain between the characters actually made me feel as if the same pain was inflicted on myself): Wonderful job YFate -YazzyBoo
| Title: Jasmine
Reviewed By: YazzyBoo On: June 10, 2010 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been a while since I've reviewed,huh(;? I literally am coming to tears with this story YFate. I apologize for my extremely long absence, but Many things have taken place in that time, including my not being able to get on the computer. Your story is captivating, passionate, and unlike any other I've read before. It is sheer and utter beauty. Awesome job, continue your magic my dear. I await your next chapter and will loyally support you with my reviews for the rest of this piece of artwork. Peace & Love, YazzyBoo(:
| Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 18:32 CST
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WOW, i've seen this story for some time but have been unwilling to read it because i dont usually read stories with Sango as the main character. but once i started i was addicted, its great. Your doing a fantastic job
| Reviewed By: JaaaaaaaaaneyJane On: August 12, 2009 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, I really don't understand why people so rarely review...your story is one of the most well written works I've ever read on this site. Anyways, on with the review...wait..crap, I gotta go to work. See just how distracting your story is? Lol, I'll finish this later. Please continue writing as well as you have. XD
| Reviewed By: JaaaaaneyJane On: May 01, 2009 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Err...where'd you update the chapter? o.O It looks the same...hmm, well, I haven't left a review yet, so I'll do it now. ^_^ Yay, they kiss! Lol, reading that scene was awesome. Hiei's arrogance and Sango's resulting anger makes for much giggles. And have I ever mentioned how much I love how you write Jin's character? Well, the way he talks, more specifically. I don't think I've ever seen anyone capture his accent on paper as well as you do, lol. Ahh, back to Hiei and Sango (hint:they would make a VERY good couple >.>), I think the best part of this chapter would have to be the ending bit with them. That last sneer Hiei does even as he's about to pass out just seems so in character. XD As always, your story never disappoints my expectations, which is why I adore it, and your writing skills, so. ^_^ I await the arrival of a new chapter eagerly...seriously, I really do. I have this on email notification, for god's sake. XP
| Title: Fantastico
Reviewed By: keke2010 On: April 15, 2009 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei wins right?!??!!? please please please?!?!?!? lol Sorry I'm just soooooooooooo tired of Kurama always "Getting the girl" so to speak. Yes Hiei's a Forbidden child but Sango is perfect for him . Kurama and Sango are just so.... different. But Anyway I loved your story so far and Am DIEING to read more lol please write more soon!!!
| Title: Holy shizzit
Reviewed By: Lidia On: April 02, 2009 14:06 CDT
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I haven't actually started reading the story yet but I usually decide if I'm going to read something by the first few paragraphs. I just wanted to say, before I started really getting into it, that that was the strongest opening for a story that I've seen in a long time and that even if I hate the rest of your story, that part was still...wow. KK I'm done :)
| Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: March 22, 2009 05:05 CDT
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Oh gosh I love this chapter. Jin's training was so fun to read, btw I don't think I have mentioned it but I do LOVE your long chapters. They are a wonder to read! Hoho no Kurama in the chapter but we see a little more Hiei at the end of this chapter :D
| Reviewed By: JaaaaaneyJane On: March 21, 2009 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lols, that last "shits and giggles" scene was awesome. XD and theres nothing wrong with insanely long chapters! especially with how well written ur story is. ^_^ i really like seeing how accurately u portray the characters, and im a sucker for the soft side of Hiei. im lookin forward to ur next update. ^_______^
| Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: March 15, 2009 02:40 CDT
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Ah great work with this chapter too, you really show Hiei's thoughts well not that he has time to reflect on the recent events that have been happening again.
| Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 15:26 CDT
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I love your newest chapter. You incorporated some great descriptive elements with Hiei's insightful pondering. I look forward to your next post. :)
| Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: February 17, 2009 01:12 CST
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Omgosh... Kagome finally appears.. I can see some sort of reunion between Sango and the others now... how would be a different question though. Nice chapter as always, I like how you added Jin's perceptiveness here. Ahhh, I really love this story~~
| Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: January 19, 2009 06:52 CST
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AHAHAHAHA! Oh Jin! Oh Kurama, you jealous fox. I loved Jin's entrance. I always thought it would be interesting if someone else appeared with an interest for Sango. I, for one, cannot quite even comprehend how Jin talks, but you do him so well!
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