| "The Heart Within" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: December 07, 2008 07:14 CST
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This chapter.. is good. Its nice to see that Sango is starting to accept herself a little more and that the group is starting to get to know each other more. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: September 11, 2008 03:24 CDT
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Oh SHI-! I think it will be a bit bigger than Yuusuke's idea of a demon rumble! Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 07:56 CDT
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Great stuff! :)
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: August 24, 2008 07:57 CDT
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Ah! So surprising with that scene with Hiei and Sango! It was so interesting to read. Kurama's perspective is always a pleasure to read as well. I like how you portray Yuusuke properly, he might act brash and stupid but there are hints that he is far from it
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You've got a very interesting story here. I love IYYYH xover fics, but I've never read one that uses Sango as a main character. It seems she is seriously ripe for some believable, outstanding action, especially with what you've changed for your storyline. Cool stuff; looking forward to the update. :)
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: August 09, 2008 04:29 CDT
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*Snorts* Amusing situation Sango has found herself in. Carnivorous unicorns wearing her down, albeit not likely that easily and she has no idea, or at least so it seems. Nice chapter
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: July 27, 2008 06:35 CDT
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Ohoho I'm quite happy with this chapter due to all the information about whats going on is given our, keep it up
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Reviewed By: milenalupin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
7 reviews in 7 wonderfully layed-out, descriptive, well-characterized chapters in such an original story? T'is a shame. (*blushes for not leaving a review earlier herself*) I'm usually not a fan of X-overs, rarely reading them at all - and I've only seen about 6 or 7 eps. of YYH, so, while I recognise the YYH boys - err, boy demons? - I really can't tell if they are IC to how they develop in the later anime. I love what you're doing with them, though. (^_^) . Sango, I see greatly described. She has the mindset to be hateful, mistrustful, unforgiving, after being left alone and hurt again. Especially after fusing her with Kagura's heart - and yes, there are some Kagura traits to discover as well. At least, I like to think so. Love what you did so far, and hope to see much more of this gemstone!
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: July 21, 2008 00:48 CDT
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Haha -chokes laughing- Leave it to Yusuke to handle these things without blowing it up in his face, interesting chapter here, we see why Hiei "wants" to help Sango now
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Title: Great part
Reviewed By: nanineko On: July 20, 2008 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your a very descriptibe writer so much that I can tell exactly what's going on. I hope your muse hasn't left you for your story tempestuous. I hope you continue
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARG!!!!!!!!!! please do not tell me that you ended it there please you ave to update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: July 17, 2008 05:56 CDT
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Aw crap, you've left us in suspense here, we get to see some nice action in the story in this chapter, good work
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: July 14, 2008 09:28 CDT
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Ahaha there goes Sango, I wonder if she would be able to gain control over her demon energy since I'm pretty sure it would be important later on
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah I agree this story is great but the first time I read it my keyboard stopped working So I couldn't leave a review. Please update soon i realy love this story.
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: July 10, 2008 04:25 CDT
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Dang I have to wonder why the hell you don't have any reviews yet, you're doing a great job writing the fic. Oh XD I just remembered because it was restricted reviews before but I'm really interested to find out more now
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