| "Underneath it All" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 22:36 CDT
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officially begging 4 more with my begging self...
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Title: Ah, makeout land...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 25, 2008 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sasuke and Naruto in makeout land fun, fun lol Wonderful chapter, thanks for updating, heres me happily reviewing as promised ;p Keep up the wonderful work, cant wait for the next chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love this story, please update soon! i will cry if you dont...
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Title: Evil Fan Women...*Shudder*
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 13, 2008 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I thought that Sasuke and Naruto's, I guess you could call it, 'Feelings of lust' lol were introduced a little to fast/soon for me. But as you set the pace for the story I grew more comfertable with the idea. Naruto's been shuned most of his life and craves human contact, which made his feelings seem more possable. That and you actually set a goal for yourself to have Sasuke win over Naruto insted of having them jump head first into a relationship. Over all I like this story and was very entertained and hope to see more chapters in the near future, which I will happily review caus' I like good authors ;p Heres hoping for another chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Another chapter, please
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, i'm really enjoying this story you've got here. I laughed so hard when Gaara said, "Vete al carajo you stupid fuck," it was amazing, to epic porportions.
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 20:12 CDT
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There is only one word that I can use to describe this story, yummy. Please, please write more.
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Reviewed By: reicheru_x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story its good and really different. Great plot line and can't wait to read more. Update soon :)
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Title: AWESOME!!~
Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: July 21, 2008 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how you came up with this story and plot line!!~ ;D Good job~ Can't wait for more~
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Reviewed By: amilita On: July 05, 2008 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed these 2 chapters. got a little confused when the prologue was after ch.1. it'd be great if you could switch them, or place a note at the top of ch.1 to read the porlogue first ifn switching them isn't possible. will be fun to see where this story goes, haven't yet read on where the boys were footballers (americam style that is).
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Reviewed By: Saiou-chan On: June 30, 2008 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you'r style of writing is unique, I like it. I've kinda felt like my fiction well had gone dry, so I've been rather bored these past few days. I didn't notice any major mistakes, so if there was any, I completely missed them. You also get points for the ending of this chapter, you'r letting Naruto subtly know Sasuke is the big man on campus, and what he wants, he gets. Though I do hope you make Naruto fight him at first, wouldn't be any fun if there wasn't a chase. *wink* I really enjoyed this chapter, thank you for lifting my boardem, please update soon? Saiou-chan
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