| "The King Vegeta Timeline" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: farennofmezzanotte [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really don't know why I'm here. YES. This IS a V/P! I hope the next chapter WILL come out soon. My computer was screwed up and I took the computer that I write my fanfics on apart. Sorry!
Ja ne, ^_^'
Faren-chan(the author) |
Reviewed By: Veresti On: July 22, 2002 01:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that this is a V/P! Please say that it is! @.@ Please?!
Love,
Veresti
P.S. Veresti@rundevilrun.com |
Reviewed By: Princess Kitana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. E-mail me when you do. kitana82483@aol.com
~*~ Princess Kitana ~*~ |
Reviewed By: Syaoran's Blossom On: July 15, 2002 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You go farrennofmezzanotte (I'll call you Farren for short!)!!
*winces* That has got to hurt... a broken tail! *shudders* *laughs* Pan's lucky Trunks isn't born in this timeline! She would of been... eh... more than embarrased, to say the least.
Lovely story, as usual! You must get the next chappie up very soooooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Syaoran's Blossom On: July 09, 2002 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Feh... you should be very proud of yourself... I usually read fics very closely and point out mistakes without meaning too... and well... I didn't find one (and if I did, I forgot about it right now).
Bwahaha! I can see the other Pan in our Pan's realm (that's confusing). If Alternate Pan actually switch bodies/minds/souls with our Pan, wouldn't it be funny when she tells everyone that she's Vegeta's *cough* 'whore' for the Mating Season (or whatever it's called)? *thinks about it and falls over laughing*
Well, I enjoyed this chappie immensly ( |
Reviewed By: Harial On: July 09, 2002 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, and I get to be the first review! *grins* That was good, and I'm not usually one to go for the Vegeta/Pan pairing, but I like this one!
No, I'm not biased... really... *winks*
Hehe, I have to admit (now that I've read it), I'm glad that my baby Isaka is being featured once again, though I definitely hope to see the circumstances surrounding Pan's situation... new and old Pans... lol!
Anyway, very cool fic! Can't wait for the next installment :) |
