"The Visitor" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Interesting Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 22:50 CDT Comment/Review: This was a very good story. It had just about every you could possible need fluff, sex and humor of course. Greatly written few if any errors. I love your writing style and like all ways keep up the great work. ~~Mors
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Title: Jaw. On. Floor. Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 17:55 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am speechless. Once again you have managed to deliver a sinfully fantastic, erotically wonderful, mesmerizing, lemony fic to us undeserving readers. I bow down to you and your lemony skills. The beginning was simply amazing. I know that whether it is a boyfriend or any other male relative, having a man make a trip to the store for those particular items is exactly how you described it. It was so hilarious reading about Ichigo doing the same for Rukia. And the best part is that I can actually see Ichigo doing it!!! Oh the IchiRukiness that we love... You are, without a doubt, the undisputed goddess of IchiRuki lemons and lemony situations (because the way you write your pre-lemon story-lines is just perfect!!!) I bow to you and pray you won't stop writing!!!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 10:50 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like how you wrote it. It was nice and cute and awkward at the same time. I was looking forward to this one and I am looking forward to the rest if you are writing more. I really enjoyed readin this one and the ending part was hot too.
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Title: oooh Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 08:55 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: cute, romantic and hot. I loved it!!!
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