| "Disturbia" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Disturbia
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 20:50 CST
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Ah,you die hard puzzleshipper.lol can't wait to say what you work in for the other three couples.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO u love brownies?
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 22:08 CST
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Great job. You still have me hooked and waiting and I look forward to another chapter.
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: January 17, 2009 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well Ryou is too kind, frankly I cannot see him doing something like this. This plot could be seen as treason when the plotters are caught. And with Yami hunting they WILL be caught! To split up a pair of lovers on purpose is beyond cruel. That's why I'm certain it cannot be Ryou. I cannot see Malik doing something like this. For a number of reasons. First this is an AU, meaning he's friends with Yugi. i doubt he would do anything to ruin that friendship. Much less cause a war. Look at that so-called betrayal! The results was a bloody war! And Ryou and Malik had to see their friend/prince Yugi going through so much pain! I think that Vampire Leader had help! And the plotter is on both sides! To plant that book in Yugi/Yami's room he/she would have to know where to go...Much less to be able to walk around freely w/o causing alarm and gossip.... I bet the servants would notice if a stranger was walking around...They would definitely talk! I don't know about Joey. While he may not be guilty, he is acting way too strange at the moment...Plus there was the mention of Seto and him...
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 14:09 CST
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This was a great story! I loved it. I really can't express all the emotions that went through me throughout this story. I hope to see more of this soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 20:49 CST
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That ending for chapter 5 was unpredicable and it was great! OMG i can't believe he said that. LOL I can't wait to read more. Right now actually.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 19:43 CDT
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YAY!u updated!*her demons clap loudly and excitedly* yeah,even my demons like ur stories,meaning their REALLY good.u challenged us to guess who the villian is.hmmm...i think it's ether Anzu or the Superior.it'd be classic if it was Anzu, but she seems pretty nice in this fic, so maybe the overlord old dude
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Title: Disturbia
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet, you updated everything!! You so rock. Malik and Marik would be great as would some more Ryou and Bakura. But not everyone is a bronze or tender shipper, so maybe they tend to want more puzzle and puppy. It seems like those two get addressed plenty though. :P I love what you are doing with that little black book, and the plot to separate them; great plot.
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Title: Disturbia
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there more?? Malik and Marik never even got to go at it. :( Ryou and Bakura need to continue their sordid affair. WAAAA MERCY!!!
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 09:59 CDT
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OMGOSH i love this one don't stop writing PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!(saying all this in one breath)
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 18:14 CDT
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Why did you stop, I was getting a really good kick out of this story. More, more, more, I love vampire flicks.
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Reviewed By: Kuvera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone loves a good vampire story...especially when, for some unknown reason, the vampiric lovers hate each other's guts. ^_^ I'm definitely enjoying this fic so far! Ouch! Poor Yami; his ego must be quite bruised after that little stab. :3
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 19:15 CDT
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what does he mean, "I faked it"?
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