| "Inseminated Love" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 00:26 EDT
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you left a cliffy. i wanted to know what kurama's reaction to the officers showing up at his house. update soon. i would like to read some more.
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Reviewed By: Raeyne On: July 29, 2008 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most original fics I have ever read! Which is saying a lot considering that I've been doing it for 4 years and spend a good amount of time on the internet! Haha. I noticed that you had some spelling and grammar problems, if you would like help with it, just let me know! I love English and would be delighted to help! Email me at fahlingraeyne@gmail.com.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I JUST HAVE TO SAY....YOU MADE THE MOST CREATIVE STORY EVER!!!! I never even thought of making a story like that! It's so cool cuz it's modernly realistic with the artificial insemination and everything and....IT'S .JUST. SO . FREAKIN. COOL how you came up with this! You definitely gotta keep going with this story! I gotta say I was so relieved that Suiki didn't have her plans succeed. I was seriously freakin' out that she would manipulate Kurama a whole lot in the story. I'm also kinda sad that you made him such a man- whore but I guess it fits him. Is Suiki gonna play a bigger part in the story? And how long before Kurama Knows whats going on? I can't wait! see ya! (yeah sorry for rambling so much ^_^" heh heh)
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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Hehe, go figure on that real life case. I suddenly do not envy men at all... Guess there is something to be said for moral character after all. Anyways, nice story. Chapter was a bit short, but still nice to get an update. Keep up the good work! Can't wait until Kags meets Kurama and sparks fly! Or for the baby test that she's gonna have to have done. Hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 18:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, IK would love to know who is the donor. I'm dying to know.!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: July 20, 2008 17:19 EDT
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Interesting how her plans are faling apart. I'm hoping the clinic will contact shuichi before they talk to the other nurse. If so, what will happen when the nurse and the doctor contact shuichi, before they talk to the other nurse. Either way, their will be a lawsuit in there somewhere. If she doesn't have shuichi's then who's did she pick up? How could shuichi get involved with a married woman. Now he got him in this awful mess, that could turn out a blessing. Assuming he could somehow win Kagome, especially after this horrible mess is over with/if ever. Not will she only not get the guy, but also lose her husband, her job, her license, and perhaps even jail time. Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 05:23 EDT
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*shakes head* i am wondering if the clinic's employees have to sign an agreement about following procedure and professionalism. a law suit naming the clinic, doctors, etc. liable may be an option. if the sperm contained disease then the person who brought it in and gave it to use could be accused with simple assault to reckless endangerment... it would be difficult to prove and prosecute so a civil suit would likely be better. . . they will have to find him, contact him explain the situation and since he didn't sign any waivers he would have parental rights if she is pregnant. he would also have the opportunity to bring suit. . . this is one of those situations that isn't really funny but has hilarious potential. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 03:11 EDT
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no fair. you left a cliffy. kinda funny that police said that this really wasn't a crime. suki is going to be pissed that she can't use shuichi's sperm to have a baby. i was hoping there was going to be a way from kurama and kagome meet. this is unusual but orginal. i can't wait to find out if kagome is pregnant and shuichi's reaction to it. kagome i think will know immediately that her child is youki though. update soon. this story is qui entertaining.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 06:44 EDT
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Heh heh! That woman has to be furious that her plan isn't going to work. I am just wondering if she will try to prevent Kurama from finding out now that he is going to be a father to another woman's baby. Then she'd really lose him for good. I wonder how much information was on the sheet she was starting to fill out? I'm also wondering if Kurama will be in trouble when the clinic contacts him, -- they're going to think HE was trying to pull a fast one. I mean, they've got his donation, so obviously he was there ... LOL!! I'm surprised the doctor didn't open the folder to make sure it matched the container. And I would assume there would be some notation somewhere of which donor was going to her. But I suppose having the folder with Shuuichi's name in it is the only for her and him to ever find out. Otherwise, she would always assume she got the donor she chose. And poor Kagome! She was so happy and then "Uh-oh!" A woman who has just had some form of surgery does not want to hear that there's a problem. LOL!! I was wondering what her reason for having the procedure done would be. I liked the comparison of her situation to Miroku's. I'm enjoying this!
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Reviewed By: Kurai Mori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting! I bet Kagome is already wondering just how badly the mix-up was, and is waiting for the worst news. I can't wait to read more and see how she finds Kurama and breaks the news to him. Right now, I can already bet that the doctor is really hoping the insemination doesn't take, but knowing Kagome's luck, I can see it. I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 17, 2008 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't wait for the next update! Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 00:35 EDT
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SNORT! Oops doesn't quite cover it. I'm so happy that you updated this 1 so fast & am looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully soon.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 02:49 EDT
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lol! my second favorite pairing in this fandom below yash/kag (gotta love the puppy). that is quite funny and i guess they have his name and only some of his information... a tall redhead... wonder if kagome is going to think she's gotten shippo's sperm when she feels youki coming from the fetus? . . . i'm with 'madmiko', this looks like it will be really entertaining indeed. ~ delighted, ginny
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: July 15, 2008 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting very interesting. I am wondering if Kurama has any demon blood inside him. I like this story so far I can't wait to see what happens after the second chapter. This is getting so good. I know that Kagome is going to be very mad. I think that she is going to go find Kurama. That would be so cool. Getting ahead of myself. So far the story is great, keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 05:45 EDT
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Oh, mercy! I can see where this one is going! ^_^ I'm not a Kur/Kag fan, but this looks like it will be very entertaining. I do wonder how poor Kags is going to end up with the goods instead of this lady, though. A mix-up at the clinic? LOL!!
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