| "Inseminated Love" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 11:03 EDT
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The authorities have been brought in and one can only wonder what poor Kurama is doing right now and how he's going to react when he finds out what's been going on. By the way I love your little true story at the bottom, can't believe she won but it is hilarious all the same to me. Guess you gotta be careful these days.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 10:59 EDT
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Oh wow, lol. Suiki has the right idea at least, get the heck out of dodge, there can be big trouble for this one. I feel almost bad for Kagome, things just never go her way. How come us writers are never easy on her?
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 10:55 EDT
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Suiki is evil and coniving and I absolutely love your Kurama. He's not a perfect gentleman but a man with needs and a complex character. I'm loving it
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 22:04 EDT
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i just realized that i have reviewed this at aff under my other name! well, what's in a name? kokoronagomu - kookookitty, if you see either of them, they're interchangeable. i do believe that i saw it updated there first as my bookmarks are arranged alphabetically. well anyway, great story funny chapter ♥♥♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter for your great stories. I appreciate the email letting me know this one was updated too. I read all of your works. I really like the comment from Kurama at the end about only thinking his mom didn't need her hearing checked that was just classic. I look forward to what ever story is updated next.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this story I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 19:43 EDT
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poor kurama. here's a question that i have if kurama has a baby since he's an avatar and can change forms what would the baby be?
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Very very creative. It will get interesting once Kagome and Kurama finally meet. I'm sure she's going to be pregnant. Wouldn't be many places to take the story if she isn't. But think about the possibilities. Of course, I suspect none of us have any idea what the laws are in Japan on this sort of mixup, but I agree with whoever said Kurama could both be sued for child support and that he could also sue for paternity, visitation, etc. While there is no "wrongful birth" in the US that I am aware of, the clinic could certainly be sued for the costs of raising the child to age 18, possibly through college etc. etc. Big bucks, as I'm sure every single parent reading this knows. Also, if Kurama was sued for child support, he could turn around and have his own lawsuit against the clinic and Suiki for any costs which he was ordered to pay to Kagome. Shiori is going to be honestly thrilled with this once she gets over the shock. Don't know what Kurama will do. He is ruthless and 1000 years old. He could suggest that Kagome consider options other than giving birth, which we all know would NOT go over well with her. At the very least there will concerns about permitting a human to carry his child. Kurama said in the very first episode he was introduced that "it was blending" so Kagome's baby will have to be part youkai, IMO. I wonder if your Kurama has money. Some authors give Kurama riches in hidden caves in the Makai and some don't. Personally, after 1000 years of being a thief, it makes sense to me that he would have more than a bit of riches tucked away for a rainy day.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 18:17 EDT
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i love kurama's reaction to news and his mother's reaction. talk about shit hitting the fan. update soon. i want to know what happens when kurama tries to track down the woman who is carrying his child and i want to know what happen when kurama finally gets his hands on Suki.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Welcome to the IY/YYH world, my dear! I hope you are very happy here ^.~ I love your story! It is intriguing and wonderfully original! I've never read one like it! Poor Kagome, being impregnated by a stranger! But oh boy, you couldn't be luckier being made pregnant by Kurama! I can't wait to see what develops! Congrats on such a brill idea! Now, on a purely enlgish point of view, I would maybe use a spell checker and watch your capital letters my dear :) Just makes it easier to read, you know! Good luck for the next chappy! That's interesting your muse is attracted to water! Mine just likes to be random hehe!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 22:25 EDT
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this is great, i cant wait to see what happens next. but i will wait paitiently (i hope) until your back gets better and you have time to write
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 04:57 EDT
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Nice chapter focusing on Kurama's current situation. I wonder about the problem he had at his last apartment, though. Was the manager too ... friendly? ^_~ Or was it because of the woman he dumped? Poor Shiori. She can't believe her son might be in trouble. He's not going to believe it either when they start questioning him as a possible sex offender of some sort. LOL!! I can't wait to see how that conversation goes! "Mr. Minamino, why did you try to impregnate a woman you don't even know?" "Was that the only specimen you left?" His mother would faint. LOL! The next chapter is going to be so good! ^_^ Hope you feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my Ican not w+ai+t I+ have to see what happens next. please
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 31, 2008 04:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the new chapter. Please update soon. Oh, but in the beginning, you kind of made Kagome seem sort of cold...like she just wanted the kid because she wanted an heir, and not because she wanted someone to love. That's more "Kagome" nature. I can't wait for you to update. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 04:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Its really good.
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