| "The Special Forces" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: madmiko, notsignedin On: March 06, 2009 16:57 CST
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Sorry to hear about your finger and the writer's block, but I offer my best wishes on your upcoming marriage. ^_^
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Reviewed By: madmiko, notsigned in On: January 16, 2009 00:18 CST
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That was a very tense chapter, yet the ending made me smile. ^_^ I think someone will be wishing he hadn't stopped her. LOL! It's only natural they would be suspicious of her for being the only surviving member of her group, so I think you played that just right. It was really nice to see a new chapter out for this story! I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens next. ^_^
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 20:06 CST
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this was good, i wonder who kags puked on :) poor guy. thank you for the update it was a great birthday present
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 01:19 CDT
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Bless your heart, darlin'! Thanks for taking the time to notify your readers about your situation. We will be waiting for you whenever you are able to come back. You, your son, and your family are in my thoughts and prayers. Be sure to take care of yourself--he's going to need his mama to be in tip-top shape to help him recuperate.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 03:17 CDT
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this is a good story so far, i hope to read more soon. it does need an au notice in the summary
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 01:44 CDT
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Please write more soon. My friends and i are big fans of your work.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 00:15 CDT
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Another great chapter! I am just completely in love with the military setting of this fic. The interactions between Kagome and the man with the ability to mask his emotions is were great! I liked the sparks jumping between them and the fact that physical contact with him shut out the turmoil the emotions of the others was causing for her. This is really an intriguing plot and I can't wait for them to start tracking down whoever sold out her team. **There was no need to apologize!! Heh heh! I was trying to apologize to YOU for giving you the idea I was being critical of the length of your chapters. I thank you very much, though, for your kind words and thoughts, and I am very honored to have this chapter dedicated to me and my daughter. ^_^ You're a dear, and I hope things are going well for you and your children, too! I'm going to have to note you to chat sometime -- we Moms who write fanfics need to form a support group. ^_^
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 04:31 CDT
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update soon. poor kagome, all of her friends are gone and she doesn't know if she can trust Sango plus she is feeling everyone's emotions. poor girl.
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 19:57 CDT
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Oo, nice chapter! I liked how Hiei's emotions were so subtle that they blended in with hers. Going into more depth with that and her empathy would be cool. Glad for the quick update. All I ask is for longer chapters. :) Even if it takes longer for an update. On that note, hurry and write the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 01:28 CDT
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Love it! The way you have described her empathic powers is so good. I was really struck by the way they/she reacted to Hiei. The idea that his control, -- his ability to "tone down" his emotions to such a level that they blended in with her own was a wonderful bit of foreshadowing. You wrote that very well. Kagome's thoughts about not being able to have a relationship intrigued me. Naturally, her priority right now is what recently happened, but her thoughts went deeper than that. I can't wait to find out what's behind that. This is a wonderfully unique beginning and setting and I'm looking forward to more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 21:28 CDT
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update soon. i am curious about this now. the story is edgy, and no one knows what you are going to write next. i kinda like it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 04:57 CDT
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This has a very interesting beginning! Coincidentally, I am a bit of a fan of Kurama/Yukina, -- I just don't see it very often. ^_^ I like Kagome's skills as a fighter, and am intrigued by her empathetic power. I'll look forward to seeing what you have planned for this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting AU. Haven't read too many of those in a while, but your short summary intrigued me. I like how this is going. Her extreme empathy is a nice, new twist. I wonder if the Jewel is going to be involved at all? And nice job (even though it's sad) on killing Kohaku like in the series. It will be fun to see what else you keep the same. Can't wait to see what happens, and who she gets with. Update soon!
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