Reviewed By: JaJemalory97 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 04:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well props to you for coming up with an original idea like this.And it was funny. I liked reading it. The only thing I find wrong with this story is that it's riddled with too many spelling and grammatical errors. Try to rectify that in the second chapter, 'cos I don't mind seeing the "'s" missing in some words, but the word manger you used instead of manager? Really, all I could think of was this trough that horses use in the stable. Because that is what manger means.
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