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| "Blurred Edges" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...this is AMAZING. YOU are amazing! I love your one shots and I can't wait to see if you write more :) ~Amber
| Title: My heart was in my throat the whole time!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your writing--have I told you that, lately! It's like rifling through someone's diary and shamelessly skimming over all the "Oh, my GRACIOUS" moments. I just was so scared for Mercy throught this entire ONESHOT; my mantra: pleasepleasepleasepleasedon'tgothereMercy...over and over and over. The ending I saw coming but was REALLY hoping I was just being assumptive and negative. But, no loose ends IMHO. It was an awesome read just like I expected, Bobby! Ya gots MAD skills and potential! Thanks for the TEASER in the forum, BTW. This is DEFINITELY a new fav! **scurries off to copy and paste and print so I can reread it at home**
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