| "Children of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea and The story. Its very good, please update when you can. I can not wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: Or am I?
Reviewed By: NotHereReally On: July 29, 2008 12:19 CDT
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You are amazing? Very nice story. I am also very glad that you called me what I am, a monkey. :3 (slash cat-thing) I think it is a very funny idea of Sasuke on his knees and forhead, bowing. I am amused. =) Thank you for this update. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 19:36 CDT
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Reviewers huh? Nice save. These four people seem very interesting I must say. I look forward to seeing their part in this.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: July 27, 2008 18:42 CDT
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Hello there! I stumbled onto your story an d I thought I would let you know that I really have enjoyed what I have seen or have read so far. It took me a while to realize that I am currently reading another of your stories; the one about Sess being kidnapped. I enjoyed your response to the flame that you received...its your story do whatever makes you happy! I noticed in one of your into pieces that you asked for a beta reader. If you would still like one I'm game. I may not be the best, but I am more than willing to help you out. :D buzzk97@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
(( He wanted her to come back. He needed her to help him like she had done before.)) I thought Naruto didn't want to be weak. Couldn't be seen as weak. But he can't take care of himself.Can't take care of his son. He is basically a crybaby retard the way you've made him. How much weaker can he get.
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Reviewed By: ANGELBOY613 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote that the day after Naruto left_Sasuke showed up in Tsunade's office 'begging' to know where Naruto was so he could try to make things right. She refused to tell him. She and the village saw him withdraw from life for 15 months and still never told him. Even after those 15 months he was never the same_and still, no one told him where Naruto was. You made it totally obvious that almost immediately after Sasuke hurt Naruto; he wanted to apologize_so he recognized his error and wanted to make it right-that does not make him an evil or uncaring man. That makes him a man that made a mistake, recognized it and then wanted to make it right. The person at fault for Naruto's withdrawal from life for 4 years is Tsunade--she would not allow Sasuke to find Naruto and apologize. So why is Tsunade not being portrayed as the evil, vindictive bitch that she is. Her not allowing Sasuke to apologize made Naruto suffer and withdraw for 4 years, and try to kill himself. How can Tsunade live with herself_knowing her refusal to let Sasuke apologize made Naruto withdraw from life and try to kill himself? How did the son recognize Sasuke at the shop if he never saw his father before? If Naruto can no longer trust Yukiko how can he live with her and allow his son to live with her. You wrote that Naruto knows she's keeping stuff from him, that he knows she met Sasuke before the meeting at the shop. Also, why would Naruto go away with a stranger to live with and give birth to his son. He had to put up walls because he didn't want to get hurt again_but he goes away with a stranger that he knows nothing about-that's not very logical. If you're aiming for over the top, ridiculously high levels of drama- you succeeded.
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Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 03:40 CDT
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I must say, I have read some very good Sasuke and Naruto fanfics over the years and this one just tops them, it is very well written. Its so hard to find very good stories that the authors continue, please continue this. I'm dieing to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 23:29 CDT
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I'm glad Kyuubi finally got to talk to Naruto. It may be hard to hear but the truth does hurt. Hopefully now his true friends can be there to help him adjust to the changes. I look forward to another update. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 22:16 CDT
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This is quite a interesting plot! I can't wait for an update and I really do enjoy the talks at the beginning and end of each chapter. Very intertaining. LOL! Naruto and Sasuke just can't keep their hands off each other and Itachi just can't stop being Itachi! I look forward to more. See ya soon!
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Reviewed By: boojae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 01:15 CDT
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this is amazing!!! i have read very few naruto fanfics! but out of the ones i have read this is one of my favorites!! i hope you continue with it soon!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 19:40 CDT
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i love it! you totally need to keep updating as soon and as quickly as you havve been. 3 days a week is like amazing.. i havent updated in about a yr, and im kinda dreading doing it again. *cowers in shame* but your story is amazing! keep on updating!
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Title: Salt!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to get myself a bag of popcorn for this! Please keep continueing... its really good! I can not wait.
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Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: July 13, 2008 14:41 CDT
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Nice. but still depressing... TT.TT MeOw!!~
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Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: July 10, 2008 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on tis chapter~ Can't wait fer more!!! ^_~ Wasn't expecting that development though
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Title: ^_^l|l
Reviewed By: hieis_lil_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 15:37 CDT
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And I forgot to say that I like the little tidbits at the beginning and end of the stories!!! SO FUNNY!!!!!!! XD
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: hieis_lil_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! That was awesome!!! But it makes ya wanna smack Sasuke for leaving poor Naruto!! *throws random object at the brunets head* DAMN YOU!!!! BASTARD!!!! And hears a cookie for Itachi!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 14:35 CDT
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This is really good! I enjoy it and it almost brings me to tears at how sad Naruto is. I look forward to see just how Sasuke plans to get through this.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: July 08, 2008 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep doing that and I'll bite your finger off. Lol XD Keep up the excellent work~ X3
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 17:09 CDT
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i feel kind of ashamed for liking naruto being so pitiful.....good job
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Reviewed By: Min-min [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! Thank you so much for posting this ^_^ i hope you would update this soon!`.`
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Title: Nice Job~
Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: July 03, 2008 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your plot. Very unique. ;D Keep up the good work. =]
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