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| "At the Base of Shall N'Ak" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 09:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love how you've kept the action going though out your fic. You mentioned that you're starting to put the italic ending from the previous chapter up to help us follow the story. Thanks, but there is another way, if you your interested. You can simply just describe the scene at the end of the previous chapter. Either way though, you're doing fine.
| Reviewed By: Larbar On: September 07, 2008 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is AWESOME!!! please please please write more chapters.
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