| "EQUILIBRIUM: Crescent of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was and awsome stroy to read so far i cant wait for the next chapie to come up
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Reviewed By: Haksi On: July 09, 2008 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, excellent storyline! I really like it up to now. But why did you change the names? I though this was going to be an Inuyasha fic...
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Reviewed By: Stinkypinker On: July 07, 2008 21:59 CDT
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Near the end, when kagome is about to fall asleep you called her ava. Also, in the same paragraph you wrote she was 22 when in the beginning during the grad.scene, she's 24 Other than this very well done. I'll keep checking for updates
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 18:45 CDT
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Wow, that was good. You're a fantabulous writer, y'know that? I'm positively quivering with anticipation for the next chapter. Whose red eyes were those? What exactly did Kagome's father do? And, most importantly, does Grampa really drink his holy water?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 21:05 CDT
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wow! that is really good! well written. there are little mysteries like the dreams, way with animals etc. the characters seem essentially familiar if not entirely 'in character'. i will be looking forward to reading more. ~ thank you, ginny
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