| "EQUILIBRIUM: Crescent of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 15:21 CDT
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one is intrigued by this tale. so much to take in, details that paint a captivating picture. ♠ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry for not reviewing sooner ! I love this past chapter !! and cant wait for more , now that my oldest is in school for the first time I now find myself with a few extra free hours to read ( YAYS FOR ME) anyways keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: etherium On: August 08, 2008 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this story so far. I hope you continue to update regularly. Although some aspects are confusing, I think they're supposed to be, since Kagome doesn't understand everything yet. I would have thought she would have asked about why these creatures are after her by now though.
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 19:19 CDT
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keep up the good work. thank you for the update! can't wait to see how inu will enter the group or what his part will be. is sess and inu still brothers in this? guess i'll have to wait and see
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Title: can't wait for new update
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 19:30 CDT
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I just wanted to drop a quick note to say that I really liked this story. This looks like a very intresting story. Keep up the good work and I hope that you'll be able to soon
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 01:16 CDT
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It's after midnight, and I'm still recovering from surgery, so maybe I'm a little biased, but I didn't enjoy that chapter as much as I thought I would. Kagome is great and all, but the name of the series is "Inuyasha". I miss the testosterone.
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 00:36 CDT
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Eeek! Y'know, around halfway through the chapter, around the time Shaun and Bimbo Number Five showed up, the knot of suspense in my gut started to uncoil itself, but that cliffhanger sure as hell tightened itself back up. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 04:05 CDT
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so the characteristics of the animal and not necessarily evolving from that animal... not different species but different breeds of human, just as all breeds of dogs are descended from wolves. some breeds would be more powerful but some also have magic or other abilities. yes?... that is how i justify reading/watching inuyasha, they aren't 'demons' (i cringe when i watch the 'dubs' and hear that word) they are 'youkai' a different branch... except of course for the lowest form oni who cannot take human form and most of those are the unreasoning, instinct driven animal oni/youkai. . . this certainly is unique, i will be watching for more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a really great story , and just to clarify , is this story taking place in georgia ? if it is that would be awesome since I am currently in georgia right now
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 04:33 CDT
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all interviews i have ever gone on were during business hours (the only time a personnel office would be open) she should have asked for another time. i live in a fairly peaceful city (pittsburgh) and i know better than to go into dark allies at night, then again i have been known to knock on doors in the projects (crack houses) at 3am to find a (former) friend who left her kid with me to watch (also reported them to the police). . . things are getting exciting. her ex should be the one who should be ashamed and maybe shot... could cut his brake lines. . . good chapter, sorry about the rambling ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was and awsome stroy to read so far i cant wait for the next chapie to come up
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Reviewed By: Haksi On: July 09, 2008 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, excellent storyline! I really like it up to now. But why did you change the names? I though this was going to be an Inuyasha fic...
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Reviewed By: Stinkypinker On: July 07, 2008 21:59 CDT
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Near the end, when kagome is about to fall asleep you called her ava. Also, in the same paragraph you wrote she was 22 when in the beginning during the grad.scene, she's 24 Other than this very well done. I'll keep checking for updates
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 18:45 CDT
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Wow, that was good. You're a fantabulous writer, y'know that? I'm positively quivering with anticipation for the next chapter. Whose red eyes were those? What exactly did Kagome's father do? And, most importantly, does Grampa really drink his holy water?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 21:05 CDT
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wow! that is really good! well written. there are little mysteries like the dreams, way with animals etc. the characters seem essentially familiar if not entirely 'in character'. i will be looking forward to reading more. ~ thank you, ginny
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