| "Something's Always Wrong" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: puppy eyed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come couldn't you have made it a boy and a girl this is my favorite fan fic how he made it in time it was funny how naruto fainted you should really make a sequal i would so read it especially if its as good as this one o and in a couple of days im bringing out a new fan fic the other one didn't go so well
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Reviewed By: puppy eyed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only thing that i really don't like about this is that you make sakura a slut and naruto a b***h , kakashi a jelous maniac, and sasuke a carazy freak in the begining ch. but what i really like is that he loves sakura so if you can make sakura less of a slut i would highly appreciate it o and keep on writing you're the first naruto fan fic that got my and the first that im reading you have me hooked on this fic
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! he made it in time! lol. loved it!!! great job!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Elemental_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
u have done a great job on the storyline so far... but wuts even better is the song choice... the two songs for the last chapter i read... with cascada and bullet for my valentine... they are two of my favorite songs!!! keep writing
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chap! it was great! i was lauging wen Sasuke and Sakura caught naruto and hinata in the living room. lol. anyway nice chap! UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story it is one of the best i have read keep it up. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't believe that no ones reviewed this! well i do like it! and i hope that u keep it going! i really want to knw what happenese next! so UPDATE SOON!
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