| "Hinata and Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!! u'v updated!!! lol. well it was good. and i think that the lemon turned out good. it was A MILLION times better then the last ones. and i like Kurenibeing evil. hehe. well anyway, it was a great chap! i can't wait for the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was one of those rare combinations of funny and sexy. The lemon was great. The only thing that bugged me was that you made tiny miniscule little grammar mistakes. Other then that I absolutely loved this chapter. And yes I did update, even though I know you already know that, I'm just mentioning it here so that others don't think i'm lazy when it comes to writing.
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 12:18 CST
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Yay! wait, so they're finally together? Is this the end!? It can't be. please say it's nott. xD Ah, i'm so hyper cause of christmas! even though its gone.. Did you have a good xmas? Lol.. i'm going off topic. but oh well. also, are there gonna be any more chapters? cause i liked it, and for a lemon it wasn't bad. =]
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Reviewed By: Misaka On: December 13, 2008 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
How old r Naruto and Hinata?????? Please tell me this is where Naruto Shippuden begins because if they are genin I am sorry but -puke-.
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Title: plz tell me ur gonna write more ?
Reviewed By: Desgardia (Rick) On: September 21, 2008 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i loved this fic its soo good a few spelling erros but who doesn't make those i jst love this fic and i reli want more cuz hinata is jst so cute in this fic u jst wanna hug her and pic he up and swing her in ur arms yea i'm jst wanting more so plz fill this fan's need and write me oh and not 2 b a pain but lemon ?
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! that was funny! i was laughing at how scared Shizune was of Miyuki! "there was this one time...candles....wip...u gotta help me." lol. i loved that line. and "What the hell do you think youre doing u pointy haired phcyco!" lol. well great chap! i really liked it! hehe. well update soon! can't wait to read another one.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 15:16 CDT
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I have a queation. Are the chapters conntected as a story? Or are the all seperate storys that dont effect each other in any way?
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. that was cute! and i can't believe that naruto fadricated a whole story like that. anyway it was funny and cute. i REALLY liked it!! can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! that was great! i really liked it! i hope that you write more! and that grouchy lady just had to ruin the moment. tsk tsk tsk. lol. well KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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