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Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2013 09:20 EST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2013 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.fav.cc/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/winners/2013-2/october-2013/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=118 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=118 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2013 00:49 EST
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Sweet! How in the world did I miss this story the first time you published it? I loved the beautiful emotions, the intricate fight scenes and the logical, flowing progression that both Kagome and Inuyasha's feelings took. I also loved the way that both Kagome and Sango were very strong heroines that were actually in situations where they had to stand strong on their own and succeeded. Kudos! I agree that a lemon would be forced when Inuyasha and Kagome were just reacquainted, though I might endeavor to ask you to re-add it as an epilogue. Maybe a honeymoon scene in the feudal era? ;-) Thanks for posting! (Oh and if you have any time to beta, I have a new story going right now that SG is helping me with. I could always use more betas. Email me if you have time to beta. ^_^) |
Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2013 22:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an award guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Current nominations can be found at our website: http://feudal.fav.cc/nominations/current-nominees/ If you're interested in becoming a member of our guild, please visit the Feudal Association: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that membership is closed during voting periods. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our guild! -The Feudal Association **Please note that you may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2013 16:46 EDT
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I really like the way you re-wrote the chapter, not everything written has to have a lemon...thats why there are so many different ratings. Good Job KB, did you know those are my initials too..LOL |
Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2011 07:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. |
Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2009 21:18 EST
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I wish the story had ended this way istead of how it really did... And I can honestly say that your way of killing Naraku is without a doubt the best way I have ever seen it done. And I'm glad u didnt make Kikyo evil like some ppl d cause that completly makes it unrealistic, she's not evil, she's dead... Theres a difference... But yea I think u did this extremly well, and am looking forward to reading others of ur work in the future, now I've gotta go read all the fan fictions of the week.. Except for Splendants work, I've already read all hers.. Though I guess it couldnt hurt to readmy Goddesses stories again...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Ending!!! What exactly was it that he carved? a little InuYasha figurine?
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great=D i loved you ending....youre actually one of the few authors that know how to keep a story flowing...i loved itXD thanks for all the hard work and ill be looking forward to reading your new story=D
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 29, 2008 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! The last chapter was oh so wonderful and I absolutley loved it. You did a great job with this story and the ending was so AMAZING. I am sad to see the story end, but you ended it on a very good note I have to say.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 00:18 EDT
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I LOVED THE ENDING! Im so glad they got back together again! Finally! lol but awesome job I loved it and you did such a good job. Im glad you didnt stop it at that one part cause i would have gone ballistic lol just kidding but yes loved it and cant wait to read more of your wonderful stories :)
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Reviewed By: Morning Lily On: September 24, 2008 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! That was a great chapter, but I really really want to read the next one, which I hope will have a grand reunion for Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Rach^_^ On: September 23, 2008 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww!can't wait to you update.
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 22, 2008 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got off work and I am supposed to be working on an essay for Psych class, but I took a small break to get my mind off of things. This chapter was great! The fight scene, Inuyasha finally coming to his senses, Sango hitting Inuyasha, everything was well written. I hope you update soon, cause I want Kagome and Inuyasha back together already.
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 22, 2008 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter ROCKED!!! Loved everything about it, especially how it was Inuyasha who purified the Shikon No Tama. You know I love this story right? So you need to update really soon, because even though this chapter was GREAT, I want another one ASAP. I will try to be patient, but I am sure I am not the only one demanding another chapter already. So update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 08:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It true... even like this is seams a bit too easy... I wonder if InuYasha will be able to purifly the other fragment in the well...
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 00:45 EDT
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Wow that was a pretty awesome chapter :D! I am soooo glad the two people I hate the most are gone! Naraku and Kikyo are finally gone yay! I mean Im glad kikyo kinda found peace good for her but no body likes Naraku haha. Anyways enough of my ranting, bust great job on this chapter and I really hope InuYasha sees Kagome really soon I can barely stand it! and I hope he gets the guts to tell her. But anyways cant wait to read more and keep up the great work!! :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 00:17 EDT
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so the purified jewel could possibly reverse the curse on the well? although you're probably going to toss in a few interesting surprises... twists? turns? at least that's what you were hinting at? ♣ sorry, i'm a little screwy right now as i had just been watching 'pink floyd, the wall', the music is better live but i think i could watch it just for the marching hammers and the 'flowers' *1970's flashback*... where was i... oh, yeah, great scary scene, reminded me of the flowers for some strange reason *scratches head* with naraku absorbing yasha and all? -but not quite. ♠ just ignore this and pretend it says something poignant, witty and intelligent, okay? ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 20:31 EDT
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Loved the new chapter! Im so happy that Miroku and Sango finally are really together but im really sad that Kagome still cant come through poor InuYasha I hope something gets fixed :(
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 18, 2008 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You keep leaving me in suspense on when Kagome and Inuyasha are going to be able to see each other again and it is driving me crazy. I am so close to pulling my own hair out, but then the pain reminds me not do it and that I don't want to have bald spots. So the only option I have left is to wait patiently. Which is not something I am very good at. (taps fingers on desk) Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 18, 2008 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to compliment you on such a great chapter. I am happy that Inuyasha reunited with his friends, but I am left feeling sad that the Bone Eater's Well problem has not been fixed. My curiousity is getting to me on how long it will take for Inu/Kag to reunite and how each will react to the new friends each has made. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww they finally got to together.. now just for Kagome and InuYasha..
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Reviewed By: Morning Liliy On: September 15, 2008 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is an amazing story and I already love it! And I have to say I always wanted Kagome to be stronger in the show and other fics I read, but the way you write her is wonderfully done. I mean you give Kagome a strong-willed personality and I love it. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 13, 2008 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Daisuke! He is so hilarious, but can serious when the time calls for it. That chapter was great! The fight scene was...wow! Update soon okay.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY cute chapters... great new characters. great story line...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 20:56 EDT
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very humorous and exciting chapter! it seems that the modern third of this story has most of the comedy your kitsune OC is great he's like a cross between shippo and miroku. one hopes that the purified bad guy's minions aren't up for revenge. ♥ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 12, 2008 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome kicks ass! That was a very entertaining chapter. I am so lovin' this story and can't wait for the next update. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 00:51 EDT
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I loved this new chapter :D very good! I thought they were really gonna get hurt for a second but then I thought of Daisuke and there he was lol it was really good cant wait to read more :D
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 09, 2008 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fighting scene rocked! You did a great job with this chapter. Loved the Sango and Miroku scenes too. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 01:11 EDT
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Love the latest chapter! and yes Samurai Champloo is a great show. The fight scene you used was perfect. And cant wait to read the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 08, 2008 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update soon.
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