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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 04, 2008 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER! So we have a sorta futuristic or present sense of Sango/Miroku pairing but in a demon form, but nonetheless their relationship is entertaining and adorable. I hope that bad guy does not come attack Kagome before she has a chance to return to her time. Update soon.
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Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Jayreview On: September 04, 2008 01:34 EDT
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Great in every way
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 23:46 EDT
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Wow...during the whole Diasuke and Miu part I kept saying this is how miroku and sango would act. I found it hilarious. Anyway good chapter!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 23:06 EDT
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Okay Miu and Daisuke and so funny! As soon as I read their reactions I thought of Sango and Miroku Great job on the new chapter the whole corporation thing kind of came together for me. I really cant wait to see how InuYasha is doing and how they are gonna get out of this mess. But awesome job! and Yess I am on my knees begging for more this story is awesomeness! lol. Anyways keep up the Great Work and hope to see more soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 22:22 EDT
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no. you get on your knees. (oh, i long for the good old days.) ♠ are you sure they aren't sango's and miroku's reincarnations? great crazy interactions. one wonders if sesshoumaru, shippo and inuyasha still exist in this time... then again if she has them here/now will she be able to go back? will they know if she went back? one can go round and round in circles of time travel paradox and theory... i'll quit now. ♥ amused ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: August 30, 2008 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you updated, which I am very grateful. But...I want more!!! I am addicted.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 16:26 EDT
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even the women can help defend their village. one hopes she is recovered enough to battle. ♣ three separate stories in one, i'm usually reading different stories from different fandoms at the same time or flipping channels and following a few different programs at the same time... it's the A.D.D. dream! ♥ a pleasure ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: August 30, 2008 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way your write Sango and Miroku. The chapter was great, as always. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the two latest chapters especially the one with Sango and Miroku very cute :). I also loved how you put Shippou's little input in the story as well its always good to show his side of the story :). You are doing a great job as always lol. I love to read your work. Plus this story is really appealing to me I cant wait to read the next chapter to see how Kagome is saved or how leaping from the building is going to turn out. Well keep up the great work cant wait to read the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: RobinLuvsInu On: August 29, 2008 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo is adorable! It is finally good to hear or actually read in this case that Inuyasha tells Kouga that he really knows nothing about Kagome. I can't wait for an Inu/Kag reunion. Update real soon.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu not signed in On: August 26, 2008 14:22 EDT
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one hopes miroku finds sango before too long. ♣ exciting fight scene, never did like the gokuraku-chou. ♠ it's nice that shippo learned some of his compassion from kagome, it would be a nice change for kasumi. she can find a real purpose in caring for orphaned youkai and hanyou childern. ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: August 26, 2008 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you updated! It is a good think that Inuyasha is finally realizing how much he misses Kagome. Update soon, or I might just go crazy and tear my hair out trying to think of what is going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: August 23, 2008 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Different and interesting. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: August 21, 2008 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please! This is such a great fic! It is different and very interesting. It is intriging to see Inuyasha and Kagome both grow a little bit during their time apart, but also how they both come to realize that they can not be with out the other. I am so curious and would really like another chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are really good at this! And also your cliffhangers are great.
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