| "Separation" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Larya On: August 21, 2008 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna read more! You are really good with cliff-hangers.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 00:39 EDT
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the flash drive might have been better off strapped to her inner thigh, then all she would have had to do is reach for a dropped pencil under her desk and remove the drive (did that to smuggle contraband to my ex in a minimum security jail twenty years ago... i've since gone straight). ♠ exciting chapter! i thought for sure that she was going to run into someone she knew in sengoku jidai but i guess that would have been too cliche. ♣ *bouncing* ginny
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always. I liked the new chapter a lot. I thought it was a cool idea to have her break into a company and do something like that. I really cant wait to read the next chapter! Keep up that great work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 01:13 EDT
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reading hundreds of stories has gotten my brain all squirrelly! for a minute i got this story confused with another where yash and kags fates were reversed... then i remembered this one. so sorry! ♠ great fight! one hopes the men will be either dead or tied up because if they recover they will be wanting revenge. ♦ one hopes yasha will not encounter any problems because he didn't listen to the directions he was given. ♣ see! i can eventually get it straight even if i have to go back and skim previous chapters (ignore the senile old woman in the peanut gallery). ♥ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job as always this chapter was cool cause it was Sango and Mirokus point of view which you dont see alot of. I bet it will be hard to have 3 stories happening at once but I know you can do it!! :D. well I cant wait to read the next chapter to see what Kagome is up to. Hope to read more soon keep up the great work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 22:43 EDT
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maybe the wolf... Ö if she had met her, i think that kagome would have befriended her, done research into the kinds of therapy that would be beneficial. maybe even introduced her into kaede's village as just another good youkai she'd adopted. i'm sure the villagers have lost their prejudice against youkai for the most part. . . one worries what will happen to sango. one would think that a cat's hearing and tracking abilities are just as good or better than a dog's... a youkai, pure nekomata would have/should have heard the altercation or at least the man's scream. exciting and touching chapter. ♦ ~ ♦ thank you, ginny
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrighty then! Love it when the InuTachi have a good adventure, yesh! Still cant figure out how I missed this one tho, ah well. I've caught up and must say I love your characterizations, and your plot has definitely pulled me in. And you're a guy? Kewl. Not enough of yuns writin some good Inu-fiction in my book, hehe. Most excellent story thus far, so until next install, update when ya can! ;0
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! Went fic hunting and found this little gem, tho am not sure on how I missed it before. *scratches head* What Ive read thus far I've liked, but am playing catch-up, so, back to reading! ;)
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the new chapter I thought it was a good idea to kinda relate Kasumi's feelings to Inuyasha like how they shared loneliness and how some people treated them like dirt. Because it showed Inuyasha that he wasnt the only one. And I thought the moves you made Sango do were cool you did a good job with that. So I really enjoyed it cant wait to read the next one and good luck in your new appartment ^_^Brandy.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 06:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I lovve this story so far! very unique cause I havent read any other stories yet that were like this one :). I am indeed a kagome fan so when that little mishap between InuYasha and Kikyo I was kinda happy lol. So thanks for that it kinda made my day. But I really hope you continue this story cause I really like it and would love to know if Kagome and InuYasha ever see each other again! well keep up the great work!!! cant wait to read more ^_^ ~Brandy.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 01:13 EDT
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¬¬ a test? the old woman knows or she is really serious? . . . the youkai kagome threatened must have had some training in 'miroku's school of hentai charm' he's not shippo as she would have recognized his youki, and since it isn't implausible that her youkai friends would still be alive... a relative? . . . i liked how you got yasha to 'rally the troops'... always knew he had it in him! and it was very 'in character', complete with the fumbling attempts to offer to listen to sango, then the embarrassed sputtering, the grumpy ultimatum and hasty exit. as a matter of fact i laughed throughout the whole chapter! ♣ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 02:01 EDT
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you don't have to clarify anything on my account as i will figure it out as the story progresses... just ignore the ravings of the madwoman. . . good, she's going to fight! i was thinking that since she can purify miasma, youki and jaki with her reiki then would it hurt to fire a few hama no ya (reiki charged purifying arrows) into the well every day... if it does anything it could weaken the spell slightly and she could feel she's doing something. . . one wonders who this son of the magic shop owner is. . . nice scene with the tachi, it's good that he didn't take the gentle ribbing personally. . . miroku alluded to yasha as a "simpleton", my opinion is that just like the rurouni mask hides the man who was once hitokiri battousai, inuyasha because of oppression and persecution put on a dangerous, impetuous and ignorant mask... i read a fic once where the only reason people feared that he wouldn't hesitate to reach up someone's a$$ to rip out their kidneys is only if they thought he was stupid enough to actually do it. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 17:53 EDT
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the other reviewer should check out chapter 465 of the manga (onemanga[dot]com) if she wants to see kikyo die... for the last time. . . well written, interesting. . . one wonders what prevents naraku from betraying the agreement he had with kikyo, something that is more in line with his nature?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter...
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome way to start out your story. You have got me hooked. I wonder how InuYasha would act. And I'm myself isn't a Kikyo fan. So if she dies (permanently), it wouldn't sadden me one bit. I thought to let you know that. :) But anyways awesome job of starting out your story and I love the other story you have posted as well. Keep up the great work!
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