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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 00:45 EDT Comment/Review: Wow that was a pretty awesome chapter :D! I am soooo glad the two people I hate the most are gone! Naraku and Kikyo are finally gone yay! I mean Im glad kikyo kinda found peace good for her but no body likes Naraku haha. Anyways enough of my ranting, bust great job on this chapter and I really hope InuYasha sees Kagome really soon I can barely stand it! and I hope he gets the guts to tell her. But anyways cant wait to read more and keep up the great work!! :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 00:17 EDT Comment/Review: so the purified jewel could possibly reverse the curse on the well? although you're probably going to toss in a few interesting surprises... twists? turns? at least that's what you were hinting at? ♣ sorry, i'm a little screwy right now as i had just been watching 'pink floyd, the wall', the music is better live but i think i could watch it just for the marching hammers and the 'flowers' *1970's flashback*... where was i... oh, yeah, great scary scene, reminded me of the flowers for some strange reason *scratches head* with naraku absorbing yasha and all? -but not quite. ♠ just ignore this and pretend it says something poignant, witty and intelligent, okay? ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 20:31 EDT Comment/Review: Loved the new chapter! Im so happy that Miroku and Sango finally are really together but im really sad that Kagome still cant come through poor InuYasha I hope something gets fixed :(
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 18, 2008 18:48 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You keep leaving me in suspense on when Kagome and Inuyasha are going to be able to see each other again and it is driving me crazy. I am so close to pulling my own hair out, but then the pain reminds me not do it and that I don't want to have bald spots. So the only option I have left is to wait patiently. Which is not something I am very good at. (taps fingers on desk) Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 18, 2008 11:44 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have to compliment you on such a great chapter. I am happy that Inuyasha reunited with his friends, but I am left feeling sad that the Bone Eater's Well problem has not been fixed. My curiousity is getting to me on how long it will take for Inu/Kag to reunite and how each will react to the new friends each has made. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:20 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: aww they finally got to together.. now just for Kagome and InuYasha..
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Reviewed By: Morning Liliy On: September 15, 2008 18:04 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! This is an amazing story and I already love it! And I have to say I always wanted Kagome to be stronger in the show and other fics I read, but the way you write her is wonderfully done. I mean you give Kagome a strong-willed personality and I love it. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 13, 2008 14:03 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love Daisuke! He is so hilarious, but can serious when the time calls for it. That chapter was great! The fight scene was...wow! Update soon okay.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 04:18 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: VERY cute chapters... great new characters. great story line...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 20:56 EDT Comment/Review: very humorous and exciting chapter! it seems that the modern third of this story has most of the comedy your kitsune OC is great he's like a cross between shippo and miroku. one hopes that the purified bad guy's minions aren't up for revenge. ♥ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 12, 2008 11:25 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Kagome kicks ass! That was a very entertaining chapter. I am so lovin' this story and can't wait for the next update. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 00:51 EDT Comment/Review: I loved this new chapter :D very good! I thought they were really gonna get hurt for a second but then I thought of Daisuke and there he was lol it was really good cant wait to read more :D
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 09, 2008 10:32 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The fighting scene rocked! You did a great job with this chapter. Loved the Sango and Miroku scenes too. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 01:11 EDT Comment/Review: Love the latest chapter! and yes Samurai Champloo is a great show. The fight scene you used was perfect. And cant wait to read the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 08, 2008 19:31 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter. Update soon.
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