Reviewed By:Alithea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 12:19 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: I decided to review this fic over here instead of fanfiction.net mostly because this is where I discovered your fic, and also because I think the fic is formatted in an easier to read manner over here. This is a very fun fic. You had me completely sold at the Macarthur Park lyrics actually. I think, and I hope as the romance portion grows you maintain the fun comedey aspects the the first few chapters have. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more. ^_^