| "Betrothed Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Title: please keep writing!!
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2013 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing this!!! i wanna read more!!! PLEASE!!! thank you!!! vampitty |
Reviewed By: jesswolf22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a good Storie i enjoy. so plz update soon. thanks
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like this one too!! now i just know i have to read the rest of your other stories though hiei and kagome's mating took place really soon... but i guess it works out cuz they don't love each other yet and they were betrothed to each other please update this soon!!! and don't forget your other ones too i plan on reading them next ^^
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 23:57 EDT
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wow great great great update you rock my soxx off really you do with this work its just simply amazing I love the way you write this and well as always update when you can
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 07:16 EST
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i love this story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: Lina03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 12:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story, I can't wait for more! I have cliffhangers! Oh well...Thanks for sharing your work and I hope you get to update again soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 22:12 EST
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wow nice update I like it a lot and if you can plzzz update when possible this story is getting very interesting hopefully you will update soon
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 01:24 EST
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please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for keeping this story up. It matters not how long it takes just that some time in the distant future you finish it so you can feel accomplished by the act. Love your story can't wait to read more when your ready. Good luck in your endeavors. smiles
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 00:36 EST
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thank you for the update, i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 03:06 EST
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update soon. i want to know souta's reaction to everything and i am curious about how things are going with hiei and kagome.
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. smiles
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 15:58 EDT
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update soon. this story is great.
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 24, 2008 13:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the new chapters! Please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 19:03 EDT
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Great Chap. I agree with Kagome. I the child was made from love then who cares. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 18, 2008 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter. Please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Kurai Mori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, another one of my favorite stories from you. I've never seen this type of story be done before and I can't wait to read more of it! You seriously have me hooked, and waiting impatiently to read more. I can't wait to see how you have the Hiei/Kagome relationship develop, as I can bet Hiei's not too happy about being betrothed to someone (a human miko, no less). But I have a feeling that sword she'll be giving him will get her into his heart just a little bit. I really can't wait for your next update to see what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol I love this it is a little sad but mainly funny in the end please update soon !!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 13:41 EDT
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update soon. i want to know what happens to yusuke for teasing kagome. and i also want to know hiei's reaction to the surprise that kagome has for him.
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Reviewed By: CapriaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:54 EDT
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Story number two in the awesome category. You are just an unbelievably talented writer. How do you keep all of your stories straight?
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Reviewed By: gjg^ On: July 16, 2008 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapters! Please update soon! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 21:10 EDT
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i like this one. i think it was cute that hiei was in the tree near kagome. she know who he is but he doesn't know her. update soon. i want to see his reaction to being promised to kagome.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 05:45 EDT
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i like kagome's thought at the end of the chapter, hoping that he would be nice but with her luck hiei would be another inuyasha. that's cute and funny. update soon.
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Reviewed By: ep On: July 13, 2008 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. please!!! write again soon. i don't really like many stories but, like i said, wow. =]
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Reviewed By: fjl^h On: July 13, 2008 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Please update soon! I love this fanfic! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARg!!!!!!!! i can't believe you left it at that please update soon I want to see hei reaction to the news
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 02:14 EDT
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it is sad that Hina lost her mate in battle. i thought it was cool though that Hina gave Kagome a tear gem to help indentify her in the future. update soon. i want to know more about them and their adventure waiting for them.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 05:27 EDT
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i love your new story. i think this one is going to be very interesting especially since hiei is still in his mother womb. update soon. i want to know what happens.
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