| "Darkening Skies" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: blueyedevil586 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realllllly look forward to the next update! Hopefully you'll get some inspiration to start back up again!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2009 22:15 CDT
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i really like this but it is really similar to the story "on the night of a blood red moon" by ryukotsusei though it's much less graphic
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 00:00 CDT
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OMBOB this is a really good story plz continue this as soon as possible I really need to know what happens next PLZZZZZZZZZZZz
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Reviewed By: hellfire95X [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it and think you are doing a great job. Please update soon, I can tell this will and is a good story!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no very nice i understod
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Reviewed By: DarkAnubisPuppy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME!!! Update soon!! DarkAnubisPuppy U^.~U
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 17, 2008 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the new chapter, but I hope you plan to be more detailed in the future. If you want someone to actually fall into the story you have to not rush through it like you're doing. You don't need to slow down, but after you write your chapters you should go back and add the details that you would like to read if you were reading someone else's story. I'm just trying to help.
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Reviewed By: CapriaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:25 CDT
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Three for three. All I can say is that you totally rock.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 04:55 CDT
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okay kagome has to suffer in order to save the future. that sucks. i can't wait for her and hiei to escape their prison and get revenge on their captors. update soon.
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Reviewed By: fjdlfj*j On: July 12, 2008 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! Please update as soon as possible! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 01:22 CDT
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update soon. i want to know what happens when her jailer comes in again. i am curious about the test that she has to go through to prove herself worthy of the powers from the jewel. it sucks that she couldn't free hiei from his collar.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 06:15 CDT
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update soon i am curious about what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 03:12 CDT
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Chapter 1 of By Demon Law is after the prologue of Darkening Skies. I wondered why the 1st chapter made no sense when paired with the prologue.
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