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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 19:44 CST
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these are some good oneshots, i do think that the last one should be made into a story. the story doesnt have to take place at the same time the oneshot could be a prologue taking place months or years before the main story.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 00:11 CDT
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yeah... makes this one-shot into a story, I'd love to read more.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 06:21 CDT
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this is a great series and i think the kagome/hiei story where he's in heat really needs to be made into a story
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 20:49 CDT
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oh i think you should make that last one into a story. i mean kagome doesnt even know hiei's name and she's pregnant, it could be great.
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Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i love this! i so think that you should make a longer story out of it.....something along the lines of kagome having the child and then meeting the father and things going from there. if you want u can email me at leona_close@yahoo.ca for more help to run that idea
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 23:05 CDT
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I rather liked the 1st one & I think you should turn the 3rd into a chaptered fic.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 15:46 CDT
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you have got to make this into a story. especially since kagome is pregnant. i would like to know what kagome is going to do and if she sees him again. update soon.
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Title: please continue!!
Reviewed By: hiei's_girl On: July 23, 2008 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please make this into a story!!! it has so much potential! :D
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 18:15 CDT
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I think this one will make a great story. Can't wait to see what you can do with it.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please add more chapters to this one shot I want to see if she actually gets pregnant.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 06:09 CDT
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you have to continue this one shot. even if it is just a couple of chapters. i want to know if kagome is really pregnant. update soon
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