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| "Afternoon Tea" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: sonicballz On: March 17, 2011 17:27 EDT
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the end? No do another chapter. | Reviewed By: dbz-lover91 On: August 06, 2008 20:10 EDT
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Hi! I don't know if you remember me but I've messaged you before on FF.net. This is my first time reviewing on this site. I always thought you had to be a member...*scratches head* Anyway, I liked this so much that I just instinctively on the 'review' button and it turns out I CAN review!^^ Stupid of me to have never tried. Oh well. I don't come on MM much anyway. This is probably your best work^^ Oh, and no insertion of random names!^^ Kudos. You can write very good lemons. I would just say that you might want to work at keeping Gohan a LITTLE more IC. This will make your writing even better. I wonder if you would be willing to write about Gohan and Videl's honeymoon? I always thought, personally, that Videl would be a virgin until their wedding night. It could be an interesting piece to read^^ I do hope you consider it. I really do enjoy your GhVi fics^^ Please do keep writing them. Regards, dbz-lover91
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