| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 07:56 CDT
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Oh my gosh he imediatly burnt his breakfast.
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Reviewed By: Kuvera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've had a sneaking suspicsion that it was that song; recongized some of the lyrics weaved into the story. >:3 But another nice (if a bit short) chapter, and a nice, quick way to shed some exposition on our favorite hikari's (and Jou's) problem. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 06:25 CDT
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Kaibas being nice in the scariest way. And somehow manages to be aloof.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Continue!
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 17:26 CDT
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this is an AWSOME story!me likey, me likey!!!
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Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, I think I listened to the wrong 'closer' song. I tried listening to Closer by Nine Inch Nails wilst reading your story and couldn't stop laughing because the story it'self isn't dirty at all. Then I stopped listening to that song and it was romantic.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 11:57 CDT
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I really do love these type of ghost stories, they are so much fun to read. And the scary thing is, when i read the part when yami was singing, I was actually listening to that very song. Creepy!
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Reviewed By: Kuvera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! Quite an interesting fic. :3 I like your different take on the ghosts rather than the most-believed info of them. (Transparent, do not need to eat/drink, etc.) Awesome so far. ^_^
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