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Title: CLOSER
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 19:42 CST
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aww, this one just gets better and better. So, it's finally out and Malik, Marik, Ry, Baku, Seto and Joe are admittedly expressing .. something for each other.lol Thank you so much for updating. :) OH, BTW. I LEFT A REVIEW FOR HIB/YIB..darn caps lock lol But I didn't realize I wasn't logged in and so it will look like an anonymous review with the title YIB/HIB.
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Title: More please!!!
Reviewed By: VLdemon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fic I've ever read with all the popular YGO couples in it- the way you blend the stories together is incredible! Not to mention some of the parts with Jou made me laugh so hard I nearly fell off my chair- only he would fall for such a silly distraction XD. Please update soon! >Gives Mokuba eyes
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 23:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good. Poor Jou and his nerves. LOL! Great job.
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Reviewed By: 2good2bebad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
It is a great story please update soon
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truely an excellent story you have came up with. I have been laughing and smiling throughout the whole thing. I couldn't even stop reading until I read all the chapters. I even almost spit out my water twice. I won't be eating or drinking anything on the next update which I hope will be very soon. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truely an excellent story you have came up with. I have been laughing and smiling throughout the whole thing. I couldn't even stop reading until I read all the chapters. I even almost spit out my water twice. I won't be eating or drinking anything on the next update which I hope will be very soon. Keep it up!
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Title: closer
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
mwahaha now I can review you on two ff sites!! lol I love this fic. Poor Ryou. I would so not be shocked if Baku got mad before hearing the boys can be solid again. That is soo like him. Seriously, Marik and Yami will beat him down. Both of them know and niether wants to loose thier love interests; even though Marik and Malik haven't confessed it. I just wish they could touch. Haven't they gotten close enough yet?? to be able to touch?? Yami and Yugi did. Seto will stay calm and cold as ever. He is so hard to get to react. lol ice berg terd!! lol Poor Jou, he's the only one saying "where?" to Yugi's distraction. lol
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 13:56 CST
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poor ryou he is going to get it big time!
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 08:16 CST
Comment/Review:
...oh shit...*her demons have wide eyes*DEMONS!DISTRACT BAKURA,I'LL GET RYOU!oh dear...poor Ryou
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Reviewed By: haven celly On: September 30, 2008 19:48 CDT
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Jou is so awesome. Bakura's a little egotistocal no? Smiling's uncool. "He seems almost human."
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Title: Closer
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm reviewing this on either AdultFf or ff.net as well. Excellent!! Please continue. I can't wait until Malik starts to break down just a bit for Marik. He has to let that rough exterior drop sometime or Marik will never see just how desperate and vulnerable that Malik really is. Ryou so far seems to have Baku wrapped around his little finger. LOL Cool.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 20:35 CDT
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MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOR EMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMO REMOREMOREMOREMORE!!! ....please?
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Reviewed By: Haven Celly On: September 13, 2008 21:58 CDT
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Can you kill a spirit? Will you kill his uncle... again? "I don't need to explain my actions." "Score!"
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 09:51 CDT
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OMGOSH YAMI TREW A KNIFE AT HIM!?!?WTFREAK?!?!(im being good tday and not writing any cusses,a challenge for me)and wha, yami cant even THINK as to the reaseon of why Yugi would kep somthing like that from him?AHHHH, HURRY AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!NOW,OR MY DEMONS ARE COMING!!!
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Reviewed By: Haven Celly On: August 30, 2008 20:50 CDT
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I really liked that chapter. Can't wait to see what happens. The things Bakura does for sex.
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