| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 08:16 CST
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...oh shit...*her demons have wide eyes*DEMONS!DISTRACT BAKURA,I'LL GET RYOU!oh dear...poor Ryou
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Reviewed By: haven celly On: September 30, 2008 19:48 CDT
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Jou is so awesome. Bakura's a little egotistocal no? Smiling's uncool. "He seems almost human."
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Title: Closer
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm reviewing this on either AdultFf or ff.net as well. Excellent!! Please continue. I can't wait until Malik starts to break down just a bit for Marik. He has to let that rough exterior drop sometime or Marik will never see just how desperate and vulnerable that Malik really is. Ryou so far seems to have Baku wrapped around his little finger. LOL Cool.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 20:35 CDT
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MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOR EMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMO REMOREMOREMOREMORE!!! ....please?
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Reviewed By: Haven Celly On: September 13, 2008 21:58 CDT
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Can you kill a spirit? Will you kill his uncle... again? "I don't need to explain my actions." "Score!"
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 09:51 CDT
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OMGOSH YAMI TREW A KNIFE AT HIM!?!?WTFREAK?!?!(im being good tday and not writing any cusses,a challenge for me)and wha, yami cant even THINK as to the reaseon of why Yugi would kep somthing like that from him?AHHHH, HURRY AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!NOW,OR MY DEMONS ARE COMING!!!
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Reviewed By: Haven Celly On: August 30, 2008 20:50 CDT
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I really liked that chapter. Can't wait to see what happens. The things Bakura does for sex.
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Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 07:56 CDT
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Oh my gosh he imediatly burnt his breakfast.
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Reviewed By: Kuvera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've had a sneaking suspicsion that it was that song; recongized some of the lyrics weaved into the story. >:3 But another nice (if a bit short) chapter, and a nice, quick way to shed some exposition on our favorite hikari's (and Jou's) problem. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 06:25 CDT
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Kaibas being nice in the scariest way. And somehow manages to be aloof.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Continue!
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 17:26 CDT
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this is an AWSOME story!me likey, me likey!!!
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Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, I think I listened to the wrong 'closer' song. I tried listening to Closer by Nine Inch Nails wilst reading your story and couldn't stop laughing because the story it'self isn't dirty at all. Then I stopped listening to that song and it was romantic.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: pearlrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 11:57 CDT
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I really do love these type of ghost stories, they are so much fun to read. And the scary thing is, when i read the part when yami was singing, I was actually listening to that very song. Creepy!
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Reviewed By: Kuvera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! Quite an interesting fic. :3 I like your different take on the ghosts rather than the most-believed info of them. (Transparent, do not need to eat/drink, etc.) Awesome so far. ^_^
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