| "Love's Boundry" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: love it
Reviewed By: WildWolf13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2010 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story so far please please update as soon as you can. im begging you
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Reviewed By: WildWolf13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please write soe more I'm about ready to die from waiting.
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Reviewed By: WildWolf13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooooooo come on are you really going to leave with a cliffy. Please write somemore. love the story so far.
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Reviewed By: WildWolf13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
love the story so far. please write some more some. can't wait to read the next chapter next week.
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Reviewed By: LICD On: July 18, 2008 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although the idea is original, why does Kagome, portrayed earlier in the series as straight- in love with inu-yasha feel immediatly attracted to another woman so quickly? ... but that might be explained later... Anyways you also wrote that kagome didn't trust herself to look in her eyes again or something of the sort. The idiom is into her eyes. Spell check doesn't get everything right if you hadn't already noticed. I liked the story and hope to read the next chapter next week. ^_^
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