| "How Long It Takes" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 18:23 CDT
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I think I read the first chapter or two of this a while ago. I'm glad I found it again; and you finished it, this fic was a nice, albeit sad, change from the norm. Happily ever after yada yada yada. Leaving Karin when she asked for help made me lul, but I ALWAYS get sad if Naruto gets killed; or Sasuke. And I think you portrayed Sakura's character very well. Even if she wasn't blind, even if her friends were not all dead, even if Kakashi was not her lover, if she had the ability that you created in this fic; I think she would use it anyways if put into this type of situation. Why would two need to die when one can be saved? anywho; well done I enjoyed this; made me think back to a Kakasaku fic I read years ago 'A Fallen Leaf' by Leafy Girl I believe If youve not read it before I suggest it 8D
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow thaT WAS AD BUT BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. i HOPE THAT YOU WRITE MORE STORIES SOON i FEEL SO BAD FOR FOR HIM BUT i LOVE THAT SHE SAVED HIM.
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! i loved it! You do great work. This was so ausome, i wish there was more. Or is there?
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Reviewed By: Renna On: September 26, 2008 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so very sad but very well written. I actually teared up in that last chapter...didn't help that I had sad music playing in the background too.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my God please tell me you will be updating soon please!!!!!!!!! thank you
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Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 23:56 CDT
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hey i love this story plz plz keep going
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