| "Mirror Image" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 20:13 CDT
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oh my. what a predicament. and yes it did answer the questions thank you. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: yuyu4848 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 16:49 CDT
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This is a really good story. My favorite couples, as weird as it may sound, is kakashi/sakura, itachi/sakura, or hinata/naruto. Update soon, its a great story!
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Reviewed By: Tanaka Hanako On: April 15, 2009 08:24 CDT
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Pretty cool story, but a couple of things made me wonder: Why is the story in the present tense? I just sort of throws you off when you're reading, y'know? Why weren't the girls outraged when they heard they'd been kidnapped as babies? Who gave Hitomi the kidnapping mission then never paid her or contacted her for 13 years afterward? Why were Natsuko and Sara so desperate to escape from Konoha and their brothers when they woke up in hospital? Why would the girls fight their brothers seriously instead of asking for a spar to test them instead? Why would Itachi just randomly kidnap Natsuki and then release her again without gaining anything? Also, I'd be wary of giving your OCs skills like chakra wings and fully developed sharingans. It can make them seem very Mary-Sue-ish. Well done!
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Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i personally think that this is a great story so far but just out of curiosity are you going to give naruto and natsuki a bloodline? or a summoning contract for foxes?
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Queen On: August 08, 2008 15:29 CDT
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Cool! Natsuki rocks! Being able to survive Itachi's Mangekyou Sharingan's Tsukuyomi without having a mental-collapse! The story is great! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: kero545 On: August 08, 2008 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a very interesting read and i've only read a few other fics were naruto has a twin.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for updateing I love it please update again.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 15:39 CDT
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Cute I would love to read more please.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Queen On: July 17, 2008 21:41 CDT
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The whole idea of Naruto and Sasuke having twin-sisters sounds so cool! I think I started reading this somewhere else... As for the challenge, Natsuki Vs. Itachi... (Stops to think) I believe Itachi would win... Yeah he would! The sharingan rules!
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